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Same, I read up to chapter 473. All i can say is that it stays that way. I mean the MC isn't bad but just boring and a bit competent.

I decide to read the chinese fanfic from the raw sources. At chapter 473, I finally dropped the story. After the first 75 chapters, I felt the quality and pacing of the story suffers, and it story just got stalled, predictable, and boring more than a few times. But at the same time, i can't necessarily call this story trash either as the Chinese author put decent effort into the characters plot and mentioned that he was going through a lot issues. Just a decent story with many flaws.

The writing quality is really good, the dialogue flows nicely, and I love lord of mysteries novel. I really can't think of any complains for this story. Its a easy 5 stars for me.

The story is acceptable if your looking for anything to pass the time, but honestly if your looking for something more then don't bother reading this forgettable story. The translation is pretty good though.

I'm really enjoying this fic, Thank you author -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

First AOT fic i read so far, keep up the good work author -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Good fic --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Since it's a elden ring fic it's automatically 5 stars ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------