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I think the premise of the story is pretty good. But I feel like the process of how we went from Death---->System----> War Is kind of sloppy causing the entire first chapter to lose some rhythm of what could be a great chapter. I'm not how to fix it but I do think something could be done to fix the flow of the story.
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Reborn with a War Thunder System
Video Games · MrEuripedes
Final Fantasy 14
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ive also have 2 chapters currently finished with a third on the way. they are currently only released on patreon but im hoping ill have them ready fir WN released soon.
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Video Games · ObsidianRain
Miralukan. Highly sensitive and "Rare" race
"Yes, My race is highly sensitive to the force, and through the force when I was meditating our homelands. A signal or pulse if you will was released calling everyone that I've found a new home."
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He has not
Diesel was using this armor to destroy tanks and walkers without a problem while stream rolling any and all droids in between him and the next tank. While also being escorted by Rayath and a couple other Valkyries outfitted in a much lighter version of an Mandalorian outfit. Colored in pitch Dark Red lining with deep blue stripes flowing down the arms. The suit covered most of her vitals basically alloying her to move at high-speed leaving there joints exposed. However, with the force they could easily deflect anything that was to be shot in their direction because of the limited amount of vulnerabilities they had. Most of the Valkyries wore Mask rather than full helmets however they carried the standard T in the middle of them. If one didn't know better their outfits could easily be mistaken as a Sith one. Today, the Valkyries were going to make their very first public appearance to the Republic and most Separatist.
Spartan In Star Wars
Video Games · ObsidianRain
im going to try a FF14 with a knight themed so far i have 2.5 chapters. One completely done and the other is some reworking and being rewritten.
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This might be another thing. I didn't really consider this. Thank you for the outlook.
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Extremely sorry for this. Maybe in the future it'll return but I dont want to make a promise im not sure i'll be able to keep at the moment.
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original Knights of Eorzea
Without giving too much away. A knight from France is sent to the world of Eorzea(FF14).2 Chs 24 Collections
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Spartan-016 Diesel was fighting for his life against the onslaught of covenant on Reach as the evacuation orders arrived. Diesel and his fellow Soldiers boarded the last remaining ship. As they attempted to escape, the ship came under fire making the ship malfunction, throwing it into hyperdive............. Please understand I'm very a amateur writer, I will make mistakes! By no means will my FF be perfect. I do 90% of my writing at work, so things will need to be fixed! I own no Characters/Object or story related material from the Halo/Star War Universe. Spartan-016 Diesel/Spartan-017 Dominick are two Spartans that are currently not registered as "known" Spartans in the Halo Universe and as such I will borrow the tags Spartan-016/Spartan-017 as my own until otherwise notified. Also, I would like to know things you would like to see in the story, Characters/Allies etc... and maybe I'll introduce such things into the story.127 Chs 5.7k Collections
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KnB Limiter
KnB? Why Not? Join Tatsuya as he makes his way to destroy the GoMs because skill cancelling moves.11 Chs 381 Collections
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Lost Summoner
Axel, a bored 18year, who had a wish that world wasn't peaceful, on a normal day he made a wish asking for a change, however he never expected that he would receive that wish just it being his world. I do not own the image and if the OG creator wishes for it to be taken down. Just let me know16 Chs 180 Collections
no i took everything off patreon and posted here as a mass release a while ago
Spartan In Star Wars
Video Games · ObsidianRain