This could be better if you used a free proofreader like grammerly or something similar to make your writing more coherent, which it lacks immensely.
Anime & Comics · ManjiroSano
Grammerly has nothing on this man, they should be paying him instead to proofread. Bet he has 100/100 on it. Anyways great novel you have, keep going. Loved the daily uploads so far.
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This could be better if you used a free proofreader like grammerly or something similar to make your writing more coherent, which it lacks immensely.
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Anime & Comics · ManjiroSano