Webnovel Author: dukroger - Fanfic Collection

Due to Mc's magic, the wolf became stronger than the others, does the same happen to the dragon? Bigger type, better scales, stronger fire, longer lifespan?

Hmmm...I see...Although a divine or ancestral blessing is not sumple magic, I understand your point of view.

Light of Rome, is a song that the MC can adapt at some patriotic moment, there is also the cost of the crown.

I recommend more depth, sometimes things are a little quick, besides, it would be cool to show the impact of the MC's actions, for commoners and nobles, a balance between the micro and the macro would be ideal for a better view of the world and those who live in it. there.

Engineering, blacksmithing, master builders, carpentry, pharmacy, herbology, alchemy, glassmaking, medicine, professional animal husbandry, training, navigation, cartography, are rings that contain these things that must be prioritized for their subjects involved in the civil side. in the military I recommend strategy, archery, riding, navigation, fencing, spears, knives and other use of bladed weapons, unarmed fighting styles, concealment techniques, survival techniques in jungles and other hostile environments, first aid and knowledge in the area, improved So for survival, all the rings in these areas are perfect for the military of their countries.

Some basic knowledge, how to use clay to make burnt bricks, Roman cement, volcanic gray quicklime and sea water, fertilizers, mix manure, warm water, gray plants, milk and molasses or something sweet equivalent, if you can get potassium and borax it would be great, mix everything and let it ferment, and stir every day, in a few months you will have an excellent liquid fertilizer, you can also try decomposition processes by box, extracting animal or vegetable oil to make soap, these are all simple things that the mc can try to use in the future , simple but highly effective things, perhaps a blessing from the Goddess Athena, for him to receive a chance to study knowledge of his old world during his dreams, he does not need to become a genius or take this world to the industrial era, but to many things that Construction, agriculture, chemistry, pharmaceuticals and other things can be made, with exclusive materials from this world it can even create new things.

In a world with Gods, the mc can say he is blessed by God or his ancestors, or even say that it is a magic awakened due to his noble blood, this is one of the cases in which a system with group benefits is justified.

the price of the crown, it's a good theme song for your story, I recommend keeping this style, songs that are too modern may not be very good for this world and time.

In fact, I noticed it only after the translator put it in the footer of the index.

Very well, the story is developing slowly, the characters are reasonably realistic, the interaction between the world, the MC and other people is ok. Keep developing like this, slowly and steadily, the golden fingers of the story are already exaggerated, so for the story not to lose its excitement, care must be taken. I know it's a dangerous world, but that's what captivates readers, the adventure, the effort, personal overcoming, growth and maturity, both of the mc and the other characters.

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You can make an MC who gains a Dimensional seed, the space starts the size of an island, it will have portals to access other worlds, and through research and study, and obtain materials from these worlds, the rarer the better, this dimension will grow, and be able to reproduce these materials over time, even living beings. The mc's power could be the ability to receive part of the characteristics of the races that the dimension is capable of creating over time, of course he would have to work hard in research and training to control and strengthen himself, but it would be an interesting story. The main world where the mc would appear, you can make an original world, like medieval fantasy, with magic and other powers, and your mc would have to over time establish a domain and territory, high-tech things or magic from different worlds could work bad due to conflicts between world rules, but they could serve as inspiration for the MC to create compatible versions in their territory. So we would have a story of building a kingdom and at the same time visiting other worlds, without one thing getting in the way of the other, and the particular dimension could become a home for beings who are refugees from other worlds and a place of protection and hope, a type of sanctuary. .

The story has potential, but the author has to be careful, many stories end up getting boring because Mc manages everything, without much effort and too quickly. I recommend developing things in a way that he has to train control, be it items or skills, group chat is a cool idea, but the roulette wheel must suffer serious limitations, like power of quantities limited to a certain amount at each level , for example SSS only 3, SS 4,S 10, A 100, B 200, C 1.000, D 10.000, E 1.000,000.After finishing this, this system would disappear and the mc would have to fend for himself.

The world of Marvel films and series after Wokerism got out of control became horrible, in fact not only films, comics and animations suffer from this. Thank God that manga and oriental animation, were mostly not contaminated by this, if not instead entertainment, we would have material that attempts to narrate identity politics and brainwashing.

I wonder if mc can gain access to other worlds with similar themes, the Lord of the Rings, Diablo, Warcraft, Eragorn, Harry Potter, The Withe, even worlds like dc and Marvel, but in the cases of these worlds with a modern setting he would have restrictions regarding technology and things like that due to differences in world essences.

There is a good chance that a serum could be created using the blood of Hulk's cousin to facilitate the transformation and reduce the effects on the individual's mind.

Brooding, new empire, Kree, Builders, Shi'ars, Chitauri, Skrulls, Klyntar. These are the largest governments and civilizations in Marvel, taking into account that Asgard should be in a different space next to other divine territories, the setting of the films changed this, unfortunately, taking away some of the mystery of the Gods and making them look like aliens.