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dukroger

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8 months ago
Replied to ElvenKing20

What is the original name?

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1 years ago
Replied to Mulato_69

The release speed is already normal for Internet stories, but the change in the way of writing is noticeable, the author is clearly wanting to make a "hero's journey", in addition to developing more original characters from the worlds, even from Marvel itself, which is the base world, that's fine, but only if the story wasn't so advanced, and the model of him traveling to a real version of game worlds is a more realistic and even cool concept, but again this would have to be put in place before, now it looks like a regression instead of progress.

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1 years ago
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The author made the MC almost die to druids, and look, they are not even druids from certain worlds, with powers to summon entities or planetary powers, imagine what the hunt would do to the MC like that? Of course it all depends on the author, but honestly this story really needs to be revised from the beginning, like if it were always like this, him being able to connect to game worlds, and maybe gaining some things in missions, like lineage and technology, it would be better to accompany the growth of the MC, not to mention involving more worlds and characters, but that requires a drastic change in the story in general, not to mention using more things from Marvel itself.

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1 years ago
Commented

In the same way that the MC is evolving, this also happens with Cortana. For me, this only demonstrates the risks that the MC's home world offers, even without him trying to provoke anyone.

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1 years ago
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We want to see the MC grow, but this should have been done at the beginning of the story. Now it seems like the author has noticed his mistake in giving too many, and too strong, powers and tries to fix it by creating a hero's journey. After the development of the beginning and giving several experiences, this seems a bit forced. Damn, if it were an entity that was too powerful like it happened before or something like that. But even Druids from The Witcher, who compared to other worlds, are not that powerful. This just shows that without the MC developing using things like serums or potions and its own rituals, without being from the system, it is very weak. With the level of allies they have, they should have already studied the super soldier serum, virus extremes, heart-shaped plant, ky potions made from dragon bones. This exists in New York, in several series like Agents of the Shield, Secret Wars, Falcon and Winter Soldier. These things end up appearing in large quantities and even working together. The MC seems to only think about the game system and forget about Marvel's potential!

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1 years ago
Replied to Just_act_lazy

Dude, there were a lot of comics that ended up with good characters, especially after the 2000s, they say it was wokerism that gradually infiltrated, I know we see things from the MC's point of view, and that he's a native, but it's clear that they made certain characters jerks, probably as a result of the vision of new comics and movies, since there are older and better animations and comics, despite their strong personalities, they weren't that jerks.

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1 years ago
Replied to Lol_2050

The sentinel serum is somewhat complicated, the birth of the sentinel and void is an unchangeable point, if the MC takes the serum perhaps he will gain maximum power comparable to the boy soldier from the TV series The Boys, but it is almost impossible to gain the power of the sentinel, not to mention the risk of the void entity that comes along.

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1 years ago
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The sentinel serum is somewhat complicated, the birth of the sentinel and void is an unchangeable point, if the MC takes the serum perhaps he will gain maximum power comparable to the boy soldier from the TV series The Boys, but it is almost impossible to gain the power of the sentinel, not to mention the risk of the void entity that comes along.

  • Marcos and the resumption of life original

    Marcos and the resumption of life

    Others

    I am launching this version here because my original is in Portuguese and in another category, I ask you to understand that I will use an automatic translator, so you can see errors. to put it simply, is about the form of a new beginning of life in a similar way but at the same time a little different from what is usually seen. I ask you to understand that this story, although it contains external references, is basically all original, so in the Portuguese version I put it in a different category. I have no rights to the cover image. to use pis found on public platforms.

    12 Chs 24 Collections

  • Marcos e o recomeço original

    Marcos e o recomeço

    Fantasy

    Essa sera uma historia lançada em minha língua patria, é basicamente sobre alguém que recebeu uma chance de uma nova vida de uma forma inesperada. Ela possui certos elementos que não me pertencem mas não achei que chegaria ao ponto de faze-la virar uma fan fic, outra coisa é que a imagem da capa foi escolhida da internet e eu não tenho direitos sobre ela, caso o autor original queira que eu retire basta entrar em contato.

    12 Chs 7 Collections