the last comma should be period :)
Frey straightened up , his daughter was a playful child , her being soo awfully serious shocked Frey , he knew that the matter would be extremely serious for her to act this way.
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
*whether :)
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Games · Raj_Shah_7152
How did be become rich?
ch 0 3 Date or Fate?
Fantasy · Yueliang_Haizi
Once his feet is aligned :)
The ugly creature's attacks missed as kicked its legs and made it fall forward. The two of them were close, so the ugly creature tried to stab its fingers toward him. Yet, Rudra rolled on his back and pushed with his hands once his feet aligned with his opponent.
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
Isn't this Naomi?
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Games · Raj_Shah_7152
Yesterday? Maybe it should be today or tomorrow author-san
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Games · Raj_Shah_7152
I dont know too much but isnt Bing Xue praised by Lilith on having high mana control on the earlier chapters? Yeah I guess she should have moved or something, maybe just a little inaccuracy by the author
ch 55 The battle is over and the debt is settled
Fantasy · XIETIAN
It was coated with all her mana lol. To use all your mana in infusing a weapon as a mage is nothing but a desperate defense/attack because mages have low physical stats. She could only hold it off for a while but not in the long run if you think about it.
ch 55 The battle is over and the debt is settled
Fantasy · XIETIAN
Kailangan mo proofreader pre or improve the grammar. Keep up the good work :)
ch 0 1 Restart Your Life
Games · Jigx
"taking care of her little brother" O.o
Lith grew increasingly fond of Rena, she was more like a loving aunt than a sister to him. He could see himself in her, taking care of her little brother as he did with Carl.
Fantasy · Legion20
Pipay
Nile saw a zombie clinging onto a metal railing like a monkey. It is a male zombie, but it has an overlong hair like a rockstar. One of its eyes is popping out. Its nose is disfigured. In its mouth, Nile could see the rows of teeth and the missing parts in between. The zombie no longer has its lips.
Urban · Neil_Ads
Does have a lot of potential bcoz MC has a different agenda in the game, unlike other VR novels
ch 60 The Entrapping Instance
Games · Not A Floating Cloud
First paragraph in the novel that makes sense to me
Seeker Carlean sat down with eyes that could shut tight at any moment. His teacher was not making the harsh and boring lesson any easier to learn. He stared at the board and tried to force his eyelids to open as wide as it can. How can any normal 16-year-old manage to fight this unassailable battle?
Sci-fi · Rapture_Tales
Five frozen centuries
Shelter: All-Class Survival
Sci-fi · Glass Cat