overall, I like what you tried to do and the info given, but was a bit of a mess, leaving me confused (i.e. Why are we covering this? Who's perspective is this meant to be? why is this even relevant?). the order in which it was done and the pacing was off imo but the end wrapped it up and put most of what was read prior into context
ch 279 Chapter 65.5 - Conclusion [Interlude]
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
I really don't get why he doesn't just sleep through a cycle
'I'm tired.'
Fantasy · Guiltythree
waste points unlocking these chapters as honestly some of the most boring chapters I've ever read
ch 277 Chapter 65.3 - Conclusion
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
his likes and dislikes made me laugh
-Likes: Tasty food, money, natural treasures, and setting things on fire.
Eastern · NecW
The thought process and entitlement today 🤷🏻♂️ how dare you be mean and not treat me like a lady whilst I act like a petty snake of a man 🤦🏻♂️
'Hmph! But he's too mean to be my type! What kind of man would even threaten a lady?' Lila thought, instantly shaking her head in the next instant.
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
Well, this was good whilst it lasted and just decided to check for updates.... 🤷🏻♂️ author has obviously dropped it with French version chapters not corrected whilst starting a new novel. think I will skip his following work going forward
ch 202 Ceasar Redemption
Games · Hamapo
I'm likely a million miles off but the thought that the 6 champions could be version's of sunny and co just hit me. Dread Lord > NephDevouring Beast > EffieUndying Slaughter > JetTorment > KaiSoul Stealer > SunnyMad Prince > Mord
The Defilement was a form of Corruption that had spread from the Estuary, and there were six champions of it… Dread Lord, Devouring Beast, Undying Slaughter, Torment, Soul Stealer. And Mad Prince.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
copy and pasted! hearing the same thing explained multiple times I'd annoying but this.... this is just lazy
As Astron disappeared into the thick fog, Ethan's heart ached with a mixture of anger and despair. He desperately wanted to go after his fallen comrade, but the reality of their dire situation bore down on him like a crushing weight.
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
the editing on these chapters is cheeks 😔 which is unfortunate because I feel the story has potential. Sentence structure and word choice is off and seems like a translation without a fluent English editor to help
ch 25 Chapter 6.2 - Lessons
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Don't see how a quick and decisive ambush is a way to test your upper limits... especially when your not a assassin/theif/rogue type character 🤷🏻♂️
The moment was ripe, and Kaden knew he couldn't let the opportunity slip by. This would be a quick and devastating ambush if he had anything to say about it.
Fantasy · Shameless_Neet
yeah OK 👍🏻 must be amazing where you come from, kids graduating 10 yrs early as standard. Intelligent young adults struggle with half what she is doing but sure 🥱
Violette could feel the pride oozing off of the man and decided this was the perfect time to break it. Pride was an undesirable trait to have when you had to obey orders.
Games · Galanar
I was talking about taking them into the boss room 🤷🏻♂️ obviously if you need 'x' number of people to open doors, then people are required but like you said... they don't have to go in once opened
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That very well might be true as I'm sure there are some children who are pretty advanced maturity/intelligence wise.... but these kids have it much better than the average working class by far. Those be massive silver spoons the kids in this story were raised with! This isn't even to mention what atrocious parents they have, allowing them access to a hyper realistic, hyper violent & explicit game that induces major trauma even to adults 🤷🏻♂️ On the whole I like the story and most characters obviously to get to this point by reading about the kids age after them doing stuff that sounds so off base just breaks the immersion.
Gale was unreachable since the incident outside of New Eden. He had said he was going on a trip to regrow his self-worth and power.
Games · Galanar
again these are not 6yr old at all 🤦🏻♂️
Violette could feel the pride oozing off of the man and decided this was the perfect time to break it. Pride was an undesirable trait to have when you had to obey orders.
Games · Galanar
and this kid was said to be only 6yrs old a few chaps back?! I hope it was a typo but 🤷🏻♂️ if not the author mustn't of ever interacted with young kids/pre teens/teens as this certainly wouldn't be the kind of thing they would say/think/do at all unless your taking late teens or young adults
Gale was unreachable since the incident outside of New Eden. He had said he was going on a trip to regrow his self-worth and power.
Games · Galanar
I really hope he achieves more this time around. Although it was an important plot point that pushed rudra to fight thor, etc, I always felt karna was done dirty and could've achieved way more
ch 117 Guildmaster Karna
Villain With The Strongest System
Games · Raj_Shah_7152