See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Servant Vaan
Fantasy · Pointbreak
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Servant Vaan
Fantasy · Pointbreak
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Servant Vaan
Fantasy · Pointbreak
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Servant Vaan
Fantasy · Pointbreak
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Servant Vaan
Fantasy · Pointbreak
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Servant Vaan
Fantasy · Pointbreak
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 0 1 A new beginning
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Blizzard54k
See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car
ch 0 1 Prologue
Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Wei Wuyin
Eastern · KevinAscending
See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car
ch 0 1 Servant Vaan
Fantasy · Pointbreak
I was hoping she would return to his stellar region with him somehow, that way he would have more capital in dealing with the Ascended that will be his enemies there. Seems like this isn't going to happen and she's just going to be another pointless character who will only have relevance in a future arc as a plot device to get him involved in w/e bs happens at the time.
ch 764 Chapter 759: Soldier of War, Promised To You
Eastern · KevinAscending
Schleya received all the resources and techniques related to blood laws from the Blood Reaper Underworld from Davis after he destroyed it. The Blood Pledge Villa was said to have been a branch of the Blood Reaper Underworld that grew independent overtime, but possessed incomplete or inferior techniques to the latter. So Davis appearing confused or ignorant about Schleya's techniques, or her explanation about how she knows all the Villa's techniques seems out of place.
"Except the immortal version of my Blood Pledge Worldheart Manual, I know everything, every technique the Blood Pledge Villa has to offer, even the one I used is something the Blood Pledge Villa's people rarely ever used."
Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
The Calamity Light is annoying, one of the few aspects of this novel that I dislike. I'm not a fan of plot devices which are intended to rush a mc, I feel like if such a device is needed, then your doing something wrong with your plotline. It was originally no big deal, because I recall Fallen Heaven stating Davis had about 1000 years before it would be problem, but out of nowhere. once Davis reaches 9th stage power levels, it's suddenly an imminent issue. Myria's also annoying, I would enjoy nothing more than Davis slapping her around then turning her into a prisoner as he tries to find a way to remove her from the girls body.
ch 1744 Congratulations
Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
This plotline is way to forced and cliche. Guess it's time to put this on hold because this arc is obviously going to be garbage. Mingyue and LC were both huge disappointments here. Lots and lots character induced stupidity.
ch 999 Chapter 999: Stop if you can
Eastern · Demonic_angel
The MC's Int stat is not properly reflected with his actions and thought process...
"So someone actually want me dead. Motherfuckers!" I exclaimed, my frustration evident as I slammed my hand onto the desk. It was a natural reaction – anyone would be enraged if they found out they were a target of such malicious intent. But the burning question remained: who could it be?
Neurolink System in the Modern World
Urban · InnocentFox