Axel looked at Takeshi in confusion. "Who were you again?" He asked, causing an eruption of laughter from Hogwarts students. From beginning to end, Axel has treated Takeshi like air, and it was absolutely hilarious.
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
Bellatrix is Kyle’s mom?
He already has felt so much reluctance and repugnance just by using what Andromeda had sent him. And that woman could be considered a saint if compared to BBWWBB, Biggest Bitch WorldWide Bellatrix Black. So, he didn't even consider using it. He was a thief with principles.
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
I think you mean Legilimens
She knew what he was about to use... "Legeremens", and she had to stop him.
Movies · Shadow7Blue
Story is good so far, I'm enjoying it and always find myself looking forward to the next chapter. You repeatedly say "finely" instead of "finally" though and it always bothers me. Happened 3-4 times in this chapter alone.
ch 25 1. Five years later
Video Games · DoctorDraco
You forgot to change Han Sen to Volkner at the end of this chapter. Also, going based on the Super Gene terminology, common/shiny "spots" should be "point" Otherwise, cool adaptation so far.
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Anime & Comics · BrazilNobAutor
I prefer Douluo Dalu
Hu Meiqiu - No harem.
ch 11 POLL: Choose YOUR Heroine
Anime & Comics · MPYR
No interest in the alternate ending
ch 20 Chapter 20
TV · PathLiar
MC's name has to be a Rurouni Kenshin reference, right?
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 : Appearance Of The King
Sports · Takz
Powerhouse - Dragonite Tank - Snorlax Tank - Bastiodon Support - Blissey Support - Hypno All Rounder - Aerodactyl All rounder - Gengar
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Anime & Comics · Shadow_Drev
I'm not sure why you've spent the last 5 or so chapters completely ignoring the character you've developed for 50, but it seems out of place for someone who is calculated, intelligent and scheming to lose his wits completely for a girl at all, let alone one he doesn't know.
ch 54 Chapter 54: Meeting with the Daynes
TV · GNaNA
Still loving the story. The expression is fanning the flames or fanned the flames, not faming the flames or famed the flames.
ch 38 Chapter 38: Edward's dirty move
TV · GNaNA
Great job so far, thanks for publishing
ch 0 7 Trial Rules
Anime & Comics · RedGunner
I agree with you, although that wasn't my original point. I meant that as an ***** with a clear goal and obvious disdain for children, romance would be out of character for the protagonist - especially if that romance is with one of the children he loathes.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4, Snape and his billiowing robes
Book&Literature · PringleEater
Noting that Yuga was unfamiliar with the Mayor and didn't know his name, Liliana deliberately mentioned the Mayor's name.
I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World
Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97