Badges 18
Moments 13
My brain autopiloted me through this sentence. I read it as "A truck driver struck."
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Villain Is on Vacation
Fantasy · Madwriter_2377
The greater the challenge, the greater the reward. It's just basic common sense.
The people of Long Fang Valley weren't sure that Cain's explanation was correct though. Shouldn't the hard-to-pat Bunnies give more luck if you could get them to let you actually do it? That seemed more logical to them.
Reincarnated With A Summoning System
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
0f course it's not about how cute they are. It's all about how cuddly they are!
The Darklight Host would never stoop so low as to pick who they saved first based on how cute they were, right?
Reincarnated With A Summoning System
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
I agree very tired of living room. I think the dining room is much better.
"How dare you get physical? You must be tired of living room!"
The Abandoned Husband Dominates
Urban · I Have Something To Say
While I understand why you would want to finish one book and start a new one with the next step. It does put a greater bit of finality to one adventure, makes the next feel more of it's own instead of just the next chapter, as well as other psychological reasons. But there are a lot of people who won't care or won't even realize that another book exists. Either way they wouldn't put in the effort to continue on from one book to another. And then you run into the problem of new readers after having put out a separate book. If they stumble upon book two before finding book one. How many of them would choose to find book one just because they thought book two sounded interesting? So realistically it's a question of your own personal satisfaction versus number of readers. It may make the work as a whole feel more satisfying to break it into separate books, but is it worth the smaller number of readers.
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SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Was beginning to wonder if you had decided to drop this one.
ch 87 LXXXV: A Fated Encounter (3)
Exodus: Infinity 》Connected《
Sci-fi · Concealed25
I can't really offer any help with characters. Pretty much every time I try to make my own stories it falls apart at making characters. All I can really say is that with the trials that he's going through you've written yourself a lot of leeway with his character. You've already set up the idea that his personality may change as he goes through them as well given yourself a great narrative wild card by not having us go with him for his first trial. As now you've given yourself an excuse to do anything from anyone's perspective without it feeling forced.
ch 76 LXXIV: Volunteers (2)
Exodus: Infinity 》Connected《
Sci-fi · Concealed25
Don't feel the need to rush and put out something that you're not satisfied with. Us as the readers may be ravenous consumption machines with an insatiable appetites that, generally speaking, only know how to shout "more more!" But really we don't even know what we want. So like any good chef take your time to make something that your satisfied with. Because if you rush it to much it'll just be an inedible mess....and it's at this point that I realize I probably went to far into the food metaphors. lol
ch 72 LXX: To The Walls (2)
Exodus: Infinity 》Connected《
Sci-fi · Concealed25
Noticed a few spots where Lillian becomes Lilliam. Other than that really looking forward to seeing how everything develops.
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Here we have the first time, at least that I've noticed, that Tia has lumped her master in with the rest of the meat bags.
"This is why Tia really hates meat bags... So arrogant, to the point where they will ignore the obvious, even if it leads to their own destruction...."
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister