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this is a bad outcome, the fort lord is depicted as a very greedy and intelligent leader how does an "intelligent " leader permit a backstabber such as Gao to play him like that. You completely neglected the fort leader roll on managing an event so important as this. This are basics mistake in character building.
ch 65 Unexpected Assault
Legend of The Young Master
Eastern · Nobelnerd
not just that, but the act of submitting Wuyi to this training makes no sense, as he already developed the thought of escaping the fort instead of repaying the debt to the fort master. which means that the author wants to create a moral excuse for Wuyi to not repay the debt.
He did not believe that Wuyi was a Qi Initiate already, but he was sure Wuyi had channeled Qi. This realization seemed to unnerve Gao, and his behavior towards Wuyi grew increasingly malevolent in the days that followed. His words were barbed, his blows unrelenting, but Wuyi remained undeterred.
Legend of The Young Master
Eastern · Nobelnerd
Sebastian, Anna, and Severus did the same and got nice results. But max get three times the price and scolded. Where is the logic of that??? Max needs a favor from neatwit. He asks three times the price and also scolds him. Max didn't skip the line it was amalia who let him go meet the guildmaster. Neatwitt and Max are supposed to be family (did you forget he is Naomi brother)?????.
ch 313 Everything has its price
MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
All paths lead to Rome.
"The basic theory of cultivation." The powerful mother replied.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
probably, exlor doesn't have enough time to think in veronica part of the plot at the moment with everything going on in the red galaxy.
Helena patronizingly patted the cyborg cat on the head. "It is true that we are trying to keep you away from our plans, but it is for your own protection. You aren't able to defend yourself against our strongest enemies. We prefer it if you stay out of the limelight. There will be many more opportunities for you to assist us after we have resolved the immediate dangers within and around the Nyxian Gap."
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
They can have 1000 god pilots, but if they don't discover the path above God pilots, they will surely get swallowed by Messier 87.
"It will take a lot more time for them to grow into senior ace pilots and even more time than that to have any hope of going through the Mech Body Merger Process." Ves pointed out. "It is still questionable whether red humanity will remain alive by that time."
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
the logic has been dropping very fast since the last chapter, probably this my last one.
'We have counties?' Silas thought with surprise, noting to himself that he should probably try and learn more about the kingdom and this world rather than focusing primarily on magic.
Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
Fantasy · Animosity
they are not overreacting. The kids are alive because of a miracle. This is not earth. This is a violent world. that mistake was a tragic one.
"How could you leave our children here alone? Are you stupid?! Does Diveen need to check up on you to make sure your healthy enough to take care of our children?" Lochras asked, his fist clenched tightly as he slowly turned away.
Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
Fantasy · Animosity
mind reading is not insta learning. it is like reading a book or information about other people knowledge and experience. is very distracting and time-consuming. a person mind has a lot of innecessay thoughts and information in order to process all that you need a super computer of a brain. so logic is very low so far in this novel.
ch 0 8 Chapter 8 Innate Abilities
Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System
Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
mind reading is a really lame skill for a mecha pilot.
"I can see other people's surface thoughts," Max says quietly, not wanting to alert the whole class to his ability.
Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System
Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
This is not his first time playing the game. The system most have alarmed him about being out of nutrients. there are too many basic logical mistakes. he is not a noob clearly a professional player. so this type of death is simply not possible. is like saying a professional shooter kill himself because he mishandled his gun.
As he lay there, realizing that he'd been gaming for thirty hours straight and that he'd neglected to refill his nutrient IV after his last session, Alexander's failure of a life passed before his eyes.
MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God
Games · Hamapo
Did you copy from a transmigration novel? He is not being reborn in a new body. Which means He just went back in time. For me, copying is not wrong, but at least you have to be aware of this kind of mistake. he can't have a different talent just because he went back in time.
Lin Feng was stunned. It was actually the same talent as in his previous life?
Online Game: You Call Him A Newbie?
Games · I'm Nine Barrel
I just read the first 100 chapters, and this novel is awesome. Keep the good work. Whoever is starting, the first 10 chapters are lacking a little bit. i even made some negative comments after reading just a couple of chapters, but i changed my mind after reading the first 100 chaps, so be patient. The reading gets only better and better, and some of the logical issues like leveling to fast or stupid guy going back to pass are going to be fixed. Alex is just insanely talented in the first chapter his capability is not well explained, but meeting cronos is just the mark for the beginning of his (sss) legacy, which means he is super talented but due to that insane talent cronos decided to sent him back on time. So he is kind of a late bloomer.
ch 0 4 Monkey Killer
MMORPG : Ancient WORLD
Games · Aibek
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 23 Offer
MMORPG : Ancient WORLD
Games · Aibek
the novel name should change to "Legend of the evil young master" it makes more sense this way readers won't quit the novel after Wuyi killing those poor kids at the fort entrance and then turning into an evil person.
ch 84 Resolving the Lack of Wealth
Legend of The Young Master
Eastern · Nobelnerd