At death's door and still bushing. 😂.......,...................Nice one author
As if reading my thoughts, the girl reached out and somehow managed to grab the knife, before bringing it up to her chest. She blushed a little when she herself pulled the cloth of her shirt away, revealing the skimpy chest wrap that barely hid any details of her impressive bust.
Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
yea
ch 82 I am at a wedding –_–
Movies · TheRamenLord
thank god. I really like your writing but I couldn't care any less about one-piece especially with the Novel being IN MARVEL
And I want to finish this arc soon.
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
Frusciante, legendary guitarist from Red Hot Chillie Peppers and River did drugs and river over dosed. It's quite controversial and many blame frusciante while many don't. At the end river wanted to do drugs and its also his responsibility for his life.
Mark's eyes widened a bit and his heart grew cold as he knew it was the place of a tragic event he had been trying to stop from happening.
Movies · TheRamenLord
mc logic - can only collect some so better collect nothing at all 💀💀💀💀
Ghostfreak could come and go from Iron Heights Penitentiary at will, but Yuri could only maintain his transformation for ten minutes, which clearly wouldn't allow him to collect many DNA samples during that time.
Anime & Comics · Baph0met
still I like this work, dont't drop it. It's a pretty awesome fanfic even if too personally colourised sometimes.
ch 62 Notes (It's a rant)
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
aint reading all that. Happy for you tho author or sad about it.jokes aside, if I am being honest, its your work you can do anything with it. Just that some of the chapters come off as virtue signalling to me. So i just skipped those.
ch 62 Notes (It's a rant)
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
u sound bitter
I mean, she is acting too familiar with him... It's only that. Nothing more.
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
It's a work of pedo.phi.lia The author has some weird as fetish. probably some iindian discord mod pedo, speaking as an indian
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again things like "that order". it goes very specific without revealing anything. normal conversations either you reveal some info or just don't say anything. Not some adult using teen girl conversation of asking each other. "hehe did u do THAT yet?" these are adults, make them talk like that
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later she even says, she retired. see that interaction is a normal interaction. "told u million times to not call me that" she retired, might be someone in the same work as nat, shield, red room. we don't know but it tells us she special. instead of blatantly saying "ex-shield Leona" like some Wattpad story for cheap corny wow factor. use more natural interactions to reveal info
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The authors' choice of transmigration and immaturity doesn't go along well together. A grown man acting all childish doesn't go along that's all.Also the development, till 16 chapters not even a day has passed. Thousands of words and yet only some progress. Loads of fillers in it, that doesn't contribute anything to the plot.I hope the author edits and paces their work properly in the future.
Reversal
Fantasy · Eroos