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part 2 lesson, let me teach you the different between [" ", ' ', ( ), and *] (this is what I know, different author may have different uses) " " - when subject is talking, you already know this. ' ' - is when the subject is not saying anything but it is in his mind!!! ex: 'I will keep fighting and sleeping while armstrong is busy doing nothing'. ( ) - is author or translator's notes. ex: (this writer is new so idk)(IHS-International Hunter School, or is it?). and the * is the surroundings sounds. ex: the bird is loudly chirping *chirp chirp, or the car is beeping *Beep *beep.So I won't comment about the story because it is still new, so let me say something to motivate you... RELEASE MORE CHAPTERRSSSS!!!!!!

I'll be honest here, in this part I already forgot the name of the MC, I only remember armstrong because the name was well-known. So let me teach you about the perspectives. 1st person perspective - is when the character is using the 'I' in the paragraph. ex: I will keep fighting while sleeping. 2nd person perspective - is when the author is explaining the subject. ex: Alex will keep fighting while sleeping. 3rd person pers. - is when the other subject is talking about another subject. ex: Armstrong strongly says that "Alex will keep fighting while sleeping."

okay, I think you wrote the 1st and the 2nd chapter in your computer or something, because the 3rd and the 4th chapter is more mobile friendly.

It's 'elaborate' to explain the detail. 'abomination' is another word for a 'disaster'. but my meaning of 'abomination' is when I see something that was not pleasing to the eye, and my 'disaster' is when some bad things happen.

okay, since I'm bored and you're so dedicated messaging each books and every novel that you encounter or read.My tips for you is use the spacing, you pressure your readers by writing a big or a bulk paragraph.The use of spacing is to make the reading easier and to also make the chapter looks longer.and it looks intimidating(the bulk paragraphs)*PS, I may roast you and curse in the following chapters, but I will continue to read this. So please bear with me...Just like I bear with this abomination of a work. goodl luck.

this proffesor is getting annoying.

1+1= 0.

since parallel memory, have parallel lives and we all know that parallel theory is multi dimensional, not just 2... so my question is will he get more parallel memory of himself?

at last!!

wait, he's dumb?

reincarnator ???

ugh,,,

the end is near...

now i know why he is named 'Kent Takeahint'

this is dumb, why is he asking if he is a regressor?