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2018-02-15 Joined United States
I will Check it out. Thanks for the recommendation
Well I鈥檓 trying to help the author not make him give up. His story is actually really good, just needs to polished. This is actually the first story I ever focus on like this. That鈥檚 how much potential I think it have. Instead of reading and not saying anything, I鈥檓 here giving criticism and he can improve. I think that鈥檚 more important.
[I wrote eye in singular because Odin has only one eye.]
Anime & Comics 路 luminous1_vanqu10
Lol it鈥檚 useless if you don鈥檛 write and can鈥檛 take criticism
ch 0 4 Training 2
Anime & Comics 路 luminous1_vanqu10
Something like that . I love you story but fix it and I will read it again
ch 0 6 Thanos faces Surtur 2
Anime & Comics 路 luminous1_vanqu10
Truck Kun, the greatest god
Didn't he remember being killed by a massive vehicle while trying to save someone? How was he still alive and well?
Eastern 路 MoBei is MoBei
They might not know what a Gu is
"It's not so much mastering the secret technique of brewing spiritual wine, more that by a fortunate coincidence, I obtained a bug called the Wine Bug. Using the power of this spiritual pest, ordinary wine can be transformed into spiritual wine."
Eastern 路 Thousand Lakes True Person
That is three realms lower
"You're a Soul Formation Realm Cultivator, but I'm only a Foundation Establishment Realm Cultivator two realms lower than you. Don't you know how to show mercy to women?!"
Eastern 路 Little Overlord From Bamboo City
Bruh
"Help? How? If everyone were like you, wouldn't I be out of a job? If you don't have the Spirit Stones, then pack up and get out! If I see you here after one hour, don't blame me for being rude!"
Eastern 路 A box of Tieguanyin Tea
Its not too bad
With one sentence, he smoothly moves past the awkwardness, raises his hand to point the surroundings, trying to regain his previous seriousness: "I believe you have already realized, this noble place with excellent people is the Feather Gate of Three Pure Peaks, from today onwards you will be in charge."
Eastern 路 Mocking Phoenix
It might have been a typo , but yes he is.
Domain: God of the Sun and Sky
Anime & Comics 路 Soul_River
I would think Japan, Germany, France and maybe, South Korea.
"There are a total of twelve states in the Demon World, corresponding to the Twelve Demon Emperors, which also correspond to the twelve main countries in reality. Each state has its own independent rankings, and the chat channels do not communicate."
Eastern 路 Monochrome Glasses
No, Gold
The Wind's Intentions propelled him while the Gold Realm controlled him and so on.
Eastern 路 A Sea Of Soup
Gold is correct. Gold means metal in the five element restraining and empowering each other. Gold is not use as often in cultivation stories anymore, so that鈥檚 why you say this.
"It's easy to control a sword with Qi, but flying on a sword is difficult," Jiang Ming said. "First, you need to have an overwhelmingly strong Qi, and secondly, you need to comprehend the Realm of Wind. Then, controlling the sword with Qi will be relatively simple. If you comprehend the Gold Realm, you can control weapons with gold, but that is not enough for flying on a sword. You need a strong spirit, and with the guidance of the divine, you might be able to fly on a sword."
Eastern 路 A Sea Of Soup
Typical plot
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: A woman who bravely does what is righteous (Request for collection and recommendation votes)_1
Urban 路 Morning Lucifer
It鈥檚 been so long since I heard of Gold spiritual roots
[Spirit Roots: Gold, Wood, Water, Fire, Earth]
Eastern 路 The Rain Keeps Falling
This is sounding really good.
ch 0 5 Chapter 005: The Divine Skill of the Bridal Dress! _1
Urban 路 Soar against the sky
I forgot, 馃拃
I Made The World Mutate
Eastern 路 Tu Yu