Writing and plot is good, but this ‘war’ lasted for too long - could barely pay attention towards the end… Well atleast it ain’t ‘Mech Touch’ level of pacing xD
[Head to Damian to receive your rewards.]
Games · TrueDawn
I can already tell that this man is a lost soul abandoned by the RNG Gods. no worries my guy, you’ll get your BiS gear one day.
This time, it was not Rey who responded to him, but one of the two women, the paladin. "We will be rolling for equipment drops and skill book drops impartially. Got it?"
Fantasy · Yolohy
I claim this line as my property.
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Fantasy · Yolohy
Its already been like what 7-8 months i guess? So she either is like 17 rn or close to 17
After spending an ungodly amount of time undressing Linde, Berengar finally got her onto his bed, where the two spent the night together, enjoying each other's warm embrace. Despite being already pregnant, Berengar tried his best to give her another child that night. After a night filled with passionate lovemaking, the two finally fell asleep early in the morning. It would not be for several hours before they awoke once more and began their daily routines.
History · Zentmeister
Ya i left about that time aswell. It became something completely different and unbearable to read tbh.
The main purpose was to speed up the protagonist's training by removing his limiter, thus I didn't really add any trial. This lazy me did it so that I could finish the novel faster, as at that point I was already bored of the novel.
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Yo this actually works?! Imma go try it myself! I’ll let you virgins know when I get some!
"Did they develop a love affair from the stab?"
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
For a smut book, there is a surprising quality to it! I don’t usually read these books, but seeing as it was particularly high in the charts I decided to give it a try. Although the book falls in line to the standards of such a plot line (every single woman is fair game), the quality of writing and shockingly deep world building compelled me to read more. Just the mere concept of Awakened powers can stoke the readers imagination and have an idea of the world outside the village. If… the story gets taken out of the village, which I hope will happen. Now, all that is needed is to introduce different cultures, meet new people and for the love of god not present everyone in the world as the same sex-driven society. Such a society just won’t be enjoyable to read no matter what. As for the characters themselves: all of them have quite the… distinct personalities. However, atleast they’re fleshed out enough to know who is who without having to name them. Though my greatest pet peeve is the authors frequent use of modern terms, like ‘plastic bucket’. I don’t know about the history of the world, but I certainly refuse to believe such a primitive society had developed something as complicated as ‘plastic’. Gotta find something else to use to describe the material of an item, xD. Another problem I have with it is the potential hypocritical nature of the MC and the state of men as a whole in this world. It was made increasingly apparent that men in this world is somewhat incapable…? Like they can only get it up after like 5-10 minutes of foreplay and last for less. Author describes all of them to be just terrible at sex, even the older generation based on how the older woman MC had sex with enjoyed their time with him… Uhh… hopefully its only in this village right?? Then there is the hypocritical nature of the MC. Or rather, the very much apparent one where he wants to have sex with other women but no man touches his women. While it is understandable, it’s just bad writing to expect him to satisfy and love all the women he had sex with and expect no one else to ’touch’ his ‘property’. Just 70 ch in and he already ‘enjoyed’ like 8 girls. Like cmon, be realistic. Anyway, good potential, hopefullly won’t degenerate into something unreadable after the reveal of his awakening.
Village Head's Debauchery
Fantasy · Royalpanda