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This MC doesn't have his priorities right. In real world these kind of people make good minions but never an MC(bosses or people with real power)

This MC is as lame as spider man. if you follow spiderman stories long enough you will realize that despite having such incredible powers, he is a loser with his life covered in sadness and pain

and then plot armor steps up to rescue. by a series of coincidences the MC will catch the dreamer successfully. no need to be intelligent or plan anything. he just need to stick to his hero morals.

Plot armor ofcourse

It is always interesting to read how the people in this kind of novels proudly declare that their government made them into the most submissive sheep ( for slaughter - some thing their government will never let them know ) and disdain other countries for not turning their people into sheep and instead giving them right to free speech, expression and independent media and social network.

isn't it obvious. Rory is a girl.

This idiot MC claims to know the dark side of society and still expected a shifty pawn shop owner to buy his super valuable crystal in a fair manner.