I hate how I'm being spoon fed the world instead of learning it as the story progresses. Show me him being bullied and the life of the non-ability users. Instead of just telling me they are. Have a teacher in class explain about the giant war. Yea it's telling but that's a classroom. You can imagine a classroom. Lots of great ways to explain and share the world and this wasn't the best way. All tell no show.
ch 0 2 A New Beginning
Fantasy · Drip
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
I hate how I'm being spoon fed the world instead of learning it as the story progresses. Show me him being bullied and the life of the non-ability users. Instead of just telling me they are. Have a teacher in class explain about the giant war. Yea it's telling but that's a classroom. You can imagine a classroom. Lots of great ways to explain and share the world and this wasn't the best way. All tell no show.
ch 0 2 A New Beginning
The Great Demon System
Fantasy · Drip