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LordJDog

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Ask and you shall receive...probably..maybe. Meh depends on my mood -_-

2018-02-27 Joined Global

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LordJDog
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To many commas, a comma indicates a pau se between an introductory word and the main point of a sentence.

The girl's heart sank like an anchor in the ocean. She felt as if she'd die, of embarrassment but mostly because of her broken heart. The boy she had feelings for all this time had just shown his complete disinterest.

My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse

My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse

Games · Haobo_Zhang

LordJDog
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openingqi (qi gathering) your switching between them, pick one and stick with it…hopefully this is just early mistakes that get fixed later on

While a month might not be that long, the absence of a Qi Gathering powerhouse for that duration would leave a significant hole in the dungeon's defenses.

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

Eastern · BLACKangelmarl

LordJDog
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Two peak body tempering or building base(foundation) cultivators?

Witnessing the escalating tension, the onlookers felt the heaviness in the air and quickly scattered. They wanted no part in a fight between two peak Body Tempering cultivators.

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

Eastern · BLACKangelmarl

LordJDog
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You mean The opening qi(Qi gathering) realm can beat a peak building base(foundation) realm cultivator

Xenos's voice turned cold, and he could have easily ordered Elder San to attack. As a first-stage Opening Qi powerhouse, Elder San had a hundred percent chance of killing a peak Body Tempering cultivator. However, Xenos preferred to keep Elder San's true strength hidden for as long as possible, as these people were unaware of it.

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

Eastern · BLACKangelmarl

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