foxtrot1674

3yr

Posted

i liked the first 40 chapter of this book. my only complaint isnthat the character are a bit 1 dimensional perhaps it's still develloping but for now that is all.

Tanky Mage System

Fantasy · Black Sky

foxtrot1674

3yr

Commented

[...] is getting pissed off by Hana[...]

'Ah! There! The guy who seemed to get the angriest when Master Zhun said that he couldn't see my powers. That guy is getting pissed off Hana.' Alex laughed as he looked around the hallway once again.

Hero System! Transported to Another World

Fantasy · Ripcorez

foxtrot1674

3yr

Commented

[...] i think she is doing [...]

Everyone looked to be in deep thought when they heard Master Zhun. Alex waited and listened in on what they were saying, 'I guess this will be my new form of passing time… Listening to these people talk. But If I look inside, I can already see that a few people are angry at how Hana is Nonchalantly just looking at her phone. Well, she is her own person… Plus, I think she id doing this to piss someone off." Alex said as he looked around the room, hoping to see if someone was angry by Hana's actions.