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Read up to chapter 114 and I love the story and the way he goes through his mind sets but he does seem to be a bit hypocritical at some points. I understand certain people need to be cut off since he doesn’t want to worry about being stabbed in the back later. It’s just he gave a chance to several people that don’t deserve it and others he just kills right away. I mean I get it, but geez some of them I feel like deserve at least a chance, dudes trying to stop the end of the world. I would think he would need more Allies. And yeah I know that from his mind set the power is already changing him a bit. But dude got some multiple personalities or something. I don’t think I was expecting him to get so dark. So I’ll probably take a break from the story for awhile. (Wanted to see more fire girl man. Would have love to see the conflicts between lily and her.) My final thoughts, Either way it had great quality on the writing and the world building is amazing. It has a sense of mystery in the background that you kinda just wanna know more about. If I had to say anything the thing that pulled me most, to this story was what the mc would do next.

Oh I definitely will come back. Just thought I would give my two cents. As I said before your world building in your story is wonderful. There’s a lot of mystery in it that I want to know more about. And I wanna see what will happen with him and those who he will interact with in the future with. And I’ll be honest I gotta know how the drama will end with him and his gf when she find the addition of other girls involved. Love a good harem. Haha But good luck in your story endeavors. Stay frosty.

The story itself seems generally interesting. Same with the world building. From what I read up to (being chapter 32) My main problem is that the writing tends to get a bit to jumbled. And, do to that I’m not sure what is going on sometimes. And then I have a few grips with the mc but I understand he’s still learning. He still immature, The story itself has great concepts. But author Keep going how your going in world building. It’s amazing, But if you do get the chance. The beginning of the story could use some work.