Webnovel Author: Rellsing - Novel Collection

It was a good run, I will stop reading this novel the world and some character are nice and the powers are good but the autor needs a editor or improve his plot, out nowhere character get stronger and his background story really leaves a lot to wish, I hope when he finish this story he improved his way of writing and create a better novel

I think this autor needs a editor, there are so much thing that appears out nowhere, the family did not delay, did not forced to end her romance(by the way out nowhere she is like ellen) and she is mad, this part could have more story but it enden like this I'm disappointed the curse was a nice touch but the rest was fast thinking

I hope he is curse but the curse is affecting him now, so the level he has is already show his monstrous talent, and if he wasnt cursed he will already beat everyone

Haha this autor has something with the lesbians XD, I don't mind but it feels out nowhere that his mother is like ellen, I was hope for a better story, the part of the reinforcement and the engagement, but this feel kind of anticlimactic, her family only make a engagement And because another family try to kill her she cut the ties with her family

Same, this autor shot needs some that will help him because if the novel stay the same it be like in 2000 chapter "that kid I play when I was little, is now the head of one organization more stronger" I just hope that the autor dobt go to the one of the stronger type like Rachel because it will so freaking annoying I already stop carrying for the Mc at this point I only hope Ashley can get his power back

It is Jillian, jill? If she is what!, it the Mc more weak now, then tell me something like his mother is the last long cousin of the family and now she stronger that his son and I will no be surprised!, this autor needs to take the Mc to the wild I rally wa hopping he was transported to another world and stop this plot that everyone has better thing than him and are more powerful and for some reason have the same killing ratio when it say he is more profit in killing and now his bloodline is as simple

If I'm not wrong he is still bellow night, I think they all think he is above because his energy control but there is not a chapter saying he level up, because he still want to have more momentum, and have the pure soul and body

I belive all the people who read this novel like me, it is because Ashley, Nero and probably the world they living because the Mc is trash

If you read of the perspective of Ellen. It's like a freaking senin novel. The supposed Mc:his childhood friend take the girl she liked and now it is stronger that him, and like to beat him up. But he is till the Mc what kind of mind put this plot XD

Finally some light, and I was thinking about changing types of armor before will be so sick and now it real, as for inherent I don't want that his inherent is weak at first and then powerful, because it wiil so boring all the people have this inherent that help them to became powerful and I hope his inherent give him more

Really if some take the plot of this novel and make a different Mc I will leave this novel so fast, the Mc is so bad and for some reason a normal character became powerful out nowhere, and th Mc that find unique thing gives away and no one gives him anything and then all the people have better thing when all he have is unique that more powerful cultivators don't have

So freaking boring!

I don't get it, he has all this powers even the professor was surprised and now he is weak, at leat say he doesn't know if he can win against hellen, not "I will lose like an ant", also where is this integration of monster, all his friend intigrate with monster to start they journey but at time they neglect that, until now the title it's monster integration but útil now all monster dissappear only Ashley that is the greatest character of this novel helps his master

So good!, just so good I like that the aut is more shocked, I want him to take his inherent, so he will be more badass

I don't like it seems he is so weak, how he lose with Ellen bride or fiance, when Rachel and them couldn't fight with him. after that he didn't visit anyone saying he lose, means he lost and the same time that he fight Ellen and at that time he was strong not like Ellen but still I hope the autor is creating the scene to the Mc kick every one ass and leave like a boss

I just want to read about the natural disaster he wiil do, when he use his inherent, if they tremble when the others inherent their legacies. What will happen when he create a complete space with blood and fire haha, all will regret to try to kill him, destroy the S guild wahahahah

Finally some information, but use 1 chapter only to this, is kind of boring, probably the next chapter will only talk how hard it is and the new místic method hope for more plot even feeling plot like planing his future now that he is strong

I think it's good that he start progressing a lot in his power but this chapter are boring I love he start getting powerful, but we have read lik 10 chapter that only speaks about his body condition and killing with out information about something like his tower, his rules he have now 1 rules and say he can only use it in adamantine and now he only speaks about his body and the resources not specific only fuelling his body hope for more interesting chapters

I think it's pretty useful he know, he is powerful but in the nex levels are monster that he cannot measure so its okay to understand his level by fighting a barley powerful enemy to know his limits and try to mesuare his own power before he gets so confident, that he will have a setback when he fight someone more powerfull