Like the story and reads well but would could benefit from an editor to make the story/sentences flow better.
ch 0 2 The life before it all began
History · maddymudda
editor required
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Fantasy · Alex_Destro
Fendrel
"MMM" fendrel opened his eyes, confused as he looked around.
Fantasy · BLACKangelmarl
Weird sentence, doesn't flow well.
Their marriage wasn't that long and it was ages since she barely smiled at him and now Edward saw a flash of a smile on her face.
Fantasy · Killerpants
Nice story, would recommend the story. If anyone has recommendations for similar books, let me know. Nice story, would recommend the story. If anyone has recommendations for similar books, let me know.
Tycoon Actor in Hollywood
Movies · NewComer714