What happened to the grammar here anyway? The quality took a huge nosedive
ch 0 3 Prologue III
Fantasy · GRE3D
This is reading too much like one of those beta Japanese MC transmigrated to Isekai worlds. I mean, looks like it's a sexually liberated society, the MC obviously has a desire, it seems weird to act so juvenile. And it is equally weird for the MC to not recognize his own strength and self worth
ch 38 Anything for you (2)
Fantasy · PWS
It might seem funny, but it’s such a weird tonal shift from the flowery prose of the first two chapters to stream of consciousness dialogues like these. Someone who’s been total trash their entire life can’t suddenly transform overnight. Imagine watching a long movie of how your life could be and changing overnight and becoming magically better. Old habits die hard. It’ll be more believable for there to be gradual change. More realistic too
ch 0 5 First Rampage
Fantasy · callow_dream
A slave would have “their” status revoked. Come on, even if It’s a slave calling them an It is too much
ch 0 4 The Advent of setting things right
Fantasy · callow_dream
Joy will be a better word here than mirth
ch 0 2 Dreams and lives
Fantasy · callow_dream
A good start but grammar and tone is all over the place
ch 0 2 Beauty and the dragon (2)
Fantasy · PWS
Oh no, we already went full on anime. A dude with a chinese surname (maybe other nationality, but roots are chinese), insists on being called "Sensei", when the setting was clearly American/Western with names like James, but MC is named Aurelia.
ch 0 9 Sensei
Fantasy · EternalNightLotus
Oh God it's still going on the, the prologue and the school drama. How
ch 0 7 The Mad Prince
Fantasy · EternalNightLotus
Oh wow the prologue still hasn't ended. I understand wanting to flesh out the background, but you're disobeying the first rule of storytelling here. Show, don't tell. There's no show and endless amounts of exposition instead. I really want to read this story though, so I'll continue further
ch 0 4 Detention
Fantasy · EternalNightLotus
Seems too much of a sob story and kinda hard to believe a government would just let two elementary schoolers be with someone who isn't a legal adult. By the description of class president etc being extra credit for University applications, it's either a western country or a fairly developed Asian country. So no way the kids aren't already in foster care. Come on
ch 0 2 Bloodties
Fantasy · EternalNightLotus
This story has so much potential, but it'll be nice to get a look at Red and the others
ch 353 Of Two Minds
Fantasy · mobius_factor
What's a budo
ch 0 9 Internal Skill Confusion
Action · Vanguard Flaming Pig
Peak chunni
ch 0 4 Good at Learning (God-Level Passive Enhancement): Experience Gain Increased by 100%
Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
There's trash tier translation and then there's this. Breaking new records for somehow screwing up even basic-ass mtl
ch 104 Barton: Why are You off Duty!
Fantasy · Southsky Star
Foist
ch 95 Monn’s Formation is Unleashed
Fantasy · Southsky Star
One of the better stories I've read here, as it's neither the trope of cultivate, get Jade beauty and do face slap nor progression fantasy, litrpg math simulator. Instead, it's a refreshing take on a transmigrated MC who doesn't immediately become overpowered with some system (though there is a system) and becomes an edgelord Jesus It is a protagonist who's slowly coming to terms with his new reality and life as a cat slave, and a noble with a complicated past. The world building is rich and detailed, with enough references to the real world that it's not completely novel. The characters are for the most part well developed and rich in depiction. There are some kinks to be worked out, such as the evil for evil bully prince but they're minor and can be easily addressed in the future. One issue is that the story meanders, lavishing detail on characters to make it seem like they matter, but ultimately are nothing more than the character of the day type. Not an entirely bad thing, but considering the novel format, it's difficult for the reader to keep track of a character who was introduced 40 chapters ago who gets referenced now.
The Healing Crown
Fantasy · PenOugi