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hey i think you need more tiers on your p@ tr e. oon that and i think they are too high personally. i just want to read the dragonball story but i’m forced to pay for the other novels. i think you’d have alot more members if you made the prices lower and let people purchase tiers for each specific story. really most people aren’t going to spend 50 or a 100 for some fanfiction unless its to donate. i think thats way too high.

i’m serious i feel like i’ve read this exact same story before months ago. are you the actual author?

gonna be honest i read this story before

sublime was a lazy excuse that also got retconned. the uncomfortable truth is marvel humans are just messed up and or the comic book writers didn’t think through. also x men has never had good writing. x men being a political commentary alongside the comic book format where creators don’t have much power and at the end of the day editorial will undo all of their hardwork next issue ment the bad writing just keep piling up and up. infact now that i think about it sublime bacteria excuse was fairly recent atleast by comic book standards and seemed to have been retconned.

why wishes? why not gacha?

ben 10 crossovers are always interesting. infact not so much ben himself but just the act of throwing a regular person with the omnitrix into any fictional setting. personally my favorite ben 10 crossover was one with Kill La Kill except the story went off the rails when author got lazy and started having ben 10 villains pop up in kill la kill and an alternate evil ben pop up too that and the author dropped it shortly thereafter probably cuz people complained. wonder why nobody has done a ben 10 nier automata or murder drones or genshin/honkai/blue archive or fgo crossover yet.

its an interesting idea but i think the way the character acts and meeting ash&friends so early on kinda ruined the story abit. the storyteller non-sense and way mc lied and acted was weird af. i’m not sure why mc has a pika with him either. honestly i’m worried mc is going to just become some support unit/ally of ash. idk why you didn’t just drop him in some random city and figure this all out himself. the idea is good the execution maybe not so much. honestly pokemon is kinda boring for the most part i’m not gonna lie.

hope sirzechs doesn’t die otherwise someone else will have to be the maou.

hes dumb also flying thunder god isn’t absolute but overrated tbh. naruto is so fast he can react to it in the later arcs let alone all the villains who seem to be so fast space time teleportations useless against them.

author he is right. pruning of timelines is just bad writing really. it works in nasuverse since nasu is a hack and the entire setting is held up together by duct tape. its okay to admit you are wrong sometimes author. honestly is there EVEN an equivalent to gaiya/alaya expie in DxD? and know great red and ophis don’t count since they are dragons who only truly care for themselves. the god of the bible in dxd also doesn’t seem to count much either since he got whacked off early. really unless you are creating oc expies for them but yeah that’d just seems ultra convoluted.

thats nasuverse earth for sure. but not all realities function like that. dxd doesn’t have pruned timelines or what not as an example author. and honestly the nasuverse excuse never really held up at all. even in the worlds where humans succeeds and makes it to the stars it seems they still never get accepted by gaia/alaya at all. its perhaps one of the dumbest gimmicks in fictional verses that doesn’t even follow its own rules. basically nasu is just a lazy hack.

its okay but why go through all that trouble of helping out phenex? just seems ultra convoluted and i’ll be honest the quality of this chapter was kinda weak compared to the previous ones.

azure you following me across fanfics or something?

i just realized i was confusing this fanfic with another fanfic lol. ignore part of my comment about mc being chuuni.

you haven’t read enough fiction then. there are animes,web novels,ln novels,vns,mangas,manhas in which characters have sentient swords that can turn into human companions. now try to be abit creative and imagine a magical slash sorcerer slash wizard slash warlock take on what that would even be. i’m sorry my friend but i feel like you aren’t that much of a fanatic.(no lifer) anyways getting back on topic a good author can make or break a story themselves doing anything. one shouldn’t let bad authors be a definitive guide on what not to do or what to do. as the idea of a sentient non human/tool object companion is an incredibly commonplace trope in fiction in particular fantasy fiction both scifi to general fantasy. as for them gaining a human form or anthropomorphic form which is generally what happens anyways as most of the time there’ll always be some remnant in either their physical appearance or behavior that clues in the readers on their true nature. i get why you are frustrated as there have been way too many bad fanfic authors who don’t understand how to write such characters or any characters at all or understand pacing or even have a modicum of grammar skills. anyways the reason i brought up demonbane is i can’t imagine someone being a true anime/manga/vn and light novel degenerate not atleast having once played that game or heard it once. and clearly the mc is a chuuni so with him copying a reality marble from fate it won’t be too long before the mc tries doing a jotaro “yare yare daze” or cid kagenou “i am atomic” scenario so since mc is in a fantasy world based off magic i assumed at some point he’d try his hand on creating sentient nonhuman allies. say such as golems or magical spirits,homunculus,etc. since frieren has grimoires i thought taking a page from demonbane would’ve fit well with the story. in particular because of how absurd it’d seem to the denizens of frierens universe. i’d like to explain in more detail. one demonbane grimioires can fuse with their holder/host like a kamen rider/power ranger suit giving them a cool stylish form alongside new powers&abilities. by themselves demonbane grimoires are mostly powerless/defenseless and function more like mascots. they aren’t all knowledgeable emotionless husks and can be depressed and betray/not help their holder/host if they are treated badly. anyways i just thought it’d be ultra cool to see mc try his hand on recreating a demonbane grimoire. imagine a necronomicon that turns into a loli that can power you up and helps you fight cthulhu and friends that and one of the strongest mechas in all of fiction. while i like super ttgl its not nearly as strong as either eldergod demonbane,getter emperor,mazinger zero,or the scp mecha the broken god/mehkane from the scp foundation(the very definition of bad writing).

its not that out of place in fantasy though. grimoires turning into people. dolls,automatons gaining free will. cursed tools becoming sentient. just look at full metal alchemist the big bad was basically an artificial lifeform that lived in a glass flask. goetia from fate grand order was basically the same too. if anything its a super common trope. what i think you hate is when say a bad fanfic author creates a system then has it turn into a loli/little sister or harem member with no little to no characterization. again anything can be done well as long as the author puts in effort. this also is problematic since technically magical summons like say golems could easily be given sentience and turned into humans in any fantasy setting. and thats just one take. lets say mc creates some fire spirit to help him out and then later on down the line it ends up with a hot chick form? really i think you just hate bad writing done with this trope.

also it wasn’t so much the show had potential to expand nasuverse lore. like i said before nasu seems to want to force his hand into every adaptation or parody related to his setting even when it makes no sense. prisma illya was him over stepping his reaches with a show that was primarily ecchi and meant for lolli lovers. i actually watched alot of prisma illya and had some doujins,artwork,and merchandise from the show purchased. so i’m still salty from nasu ruining prisma illya. i just get really angry on an emotional level seeing prisma illya tainted with mainline nasuverse nonsense. imagine if you had a semiofficial ecchi spinoff of dbz loosely related and akira toriyama tried to force it into the mainline universe even when its illogical and force lore-nonsense that made no sense down your throat thats basically what unfortunately happened to prisma illya.

oh i’m aware of this but prisma ilya becoming a serious adaptation was just nasu inserting his fingers where he shouldn’t have often times taking a successful nasuverse spinoff and trying to force into into the mainline universe this more or less killed prisma illyas popularity from what i remember during that time. basically imagine attack on titan or tokyo ghoul becoming a rom com shoujo slice of life suddenly. thats basically what happened near the later episodes of prisma illya. i remember there were lots of complaints of how the show felt like it changed entirely into a different product. the thing is i have no complaint against serious prisma ilya it just feels really out of place compared to regular nasuverse. this wasn’t the first time where nasu took some successful parody adaptation he didn’t really have a hand in and tried to steal it for himself. prisma illya was just the most egregious and blatant example out of them all. thats why i like it when authors are fans of the settings of the fanfics they r writing about so they don’t make basic mistakes like adding in prisma illya as servants in a serious nasuverse fanfic. personally i could see it working in a really parody-ish nasu fanfic where you aren’t meant to take it seriously. honestly as ecchi as prisma ilya was it was a good show but it becoming serious made no sense at all. nasu has a bad habit of trying to force things together that don’t work. maybe he just gets jealous when someone else is successful with his ip so maybe this was his way of getting revenge? who knows really? anyways prisma illya will always be out of place in the mainline nasuverse regardless of how much nasu tries to force it.