If you scroll back up. It says he had 325. Now he used 300 so he should have 25 left.
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Fantasy · DelzGB
I admit i feel bad that you went back and changed it. That wasn’t my intention. I was giving constructive criticism and feed back because it seem like a plot hole that could’ve been prevented. I will admit that your changes make the story feel smoother now. Like he couldn’t make up his mind which is good for character development, because he’s conflicted with how he feels and what he needs to do.
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Fantasy · DelzGB
I understand the character growth. It seems silly because 2 months is a long time after the first apocalypse events. Most of the bad habits and personality should be tempered and hardened at this period. After all 50% of the worlds population is deceased. Tomorrow can be his last day for all he knows, more strength is good. For example: A civilian takes roughly 2 months to change their morales and mindset. To make a prey into predator. MC is in an even worst situation. He’s thrown into the crucible, he wouldn’t leave something so beneficial. Even if it was given to him. Im sorry for the rant. I will continue reading more.
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Fantasy · DelzGB
Im sorry, this had a good start but now it’s shaky. Hear me out. Apocalypse setting world and knows he’s weak. Refusing a free benefit is a Darwin Award Winner. I’m 50/50 contemplating if i should drop this because that is a BIG mistake. I don’t mind MC making mistakes but this is not a mistake. He let his pride and ego get the best of him. He is given an opportunity and decided against it.
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Fantasy · DelzGB
The sword is on his back, of course he’s going to have trouble. That’s why everyone carries them on the hip. Easy to draw and sheath.
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Fantasy · DelzGB
Press x to doubt. He could’ve done anal.
Ruli shook her head and said, "No."
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
Reverse grip has no value. That weeb shit doesn’t work irl. Anyone who’s ever held a knife would know.
Grasping his sword, Realm leaned forward, tilting toward Gray. Meanwhile, Gray shifted the grip of both of his knives into reverse as he too leaned in.
Fantasy · Renovator
So that’s why Biden can’t complete a full sentence properly. He’s been seeing shit huh?
"If the prophecy is true… Then this is only the beginning…" He muttered.
Fantasy · Renovator
Despite writing 4 different Novels and updating. Much thanks for the chapter.
ch 134 [Bonus chapter]Chapter 133- A Mermaid's Body
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
That’s how you get a bloody split lip.
But because of the sudden movement, she ended up losing her balance and falling on top of him, her lips slamming down on his.
Fantasy · Yolohy
Bread is bad for ducks. At least that’s what I’ve heard/read before.
He charged with incredible fury. He was akin to a duck that had its bread stolen by a hooligan right in front of its face!
Games · ClasslessAscension
He didnt get the sword back. Old man just left with it.
ch 122 Everything is fate
Fantasy · Yolohy
Even with energy shields, its going to drain that energy to stop incoming rounds. Only a matter of time before energy runs out and rounds start passing through.
However, the monster's hides happened to be so thick and their defense so ferocious that most modern weapons simply didn't work against them. Guns were useless against them, but bombs worked. Of course, even that was useless against monsters that were fast enough to outrun an explosion or strong enough to endure one.
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
Just want you to know bullets go through metal. The right caliber and grain will defeat even concrete barriers. Even if they have magical hides to protect them, blunt force trauma is a real thing. Internal hemorrhage is serious. Rules of physics don’t just stop working. Hit something enough times and it will break. I understand you want to showcase how incredibly strong the enemies are. But you shouldn’t write off guns as if it’s weak. Guns are very powerful kinetic weapons.
However, the monster's hides happened to be so thick and their defense so ferocious that most modern weapons simply didn't work against them. Guns were useless against them, but bombs worked. Of course, even that was useless against monsters that were fast enough to outrun an explosion or strong enough to endure one.
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
One permanent buff for every effective pill… Now that’s alotta dmg!
ch 240 Making a Fortune From War
Eastern · Turtle Shell and Hemp Rope
Lets go!!! My boi in charge now!
ch 238 I, The First Generation Alliance Leader!
Eastern · Turtle Shell and Hemp Rope
Because that makes too much sense
ch 449 Do You Think It Exists?
Games · MyLittleBrother
Seems like a great ability to use for spying? He wants information, what better way then eavesdropping.
ch 96 Blessing of the Deep
Fantasy · John_Doever
Alt Account trash. Going around copy paste the same review on other novels. You even copied the top review here word for word.
Monster Integration
Fantasy · AnWan