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I am a loyal soldier of the Yuri banner! With heart and soul ready to sacrifice for the betterment of Yuri!YURI!YURI!

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Absolutely retarded work just like the author and his other wn. You build the most retarded world filled with retarded people with the most gary sues being handed everything to him without any difficulty or struggly, you turn other characters into shit-fucking retarded like you just to give th illusion that your self-insert has any bearing of competence. You treat the industry like a coinslot that would spat out anything as long you have "magical blue print" not caring wheteher the industry immature in technological means, resources, knowledge and craftmanship. There is no absolutely fucking pacing, technology build up is the most terrible when it comes to spreading and maturing, you are the kind of person who write a barbarian society suddenly turning into 21st century America level tech and culture in just 5 years because "i HaVe bLuEpRiNT" the politics and economic in the work are shittfucking retarded written by a 9 years old boy who thinks printing more money would make everyone wealthy, yes I am talking about you. If you had not handed everything to your gary stu self-insert he would have been assasinated and revolted against with how shit fuckingly low iq autistic retard he handles his government and politics. Take for example, somehow your protagonist was allowed to blatantly show off his harem and legitimize his bastard without any fuckng consequence. This is central europe you retard, even if you have a mistress and bastard you don't fucking disturb the water by doing the shit you do. You better write muslim or chinese character if you can't even realize this. In conclusion, I can't believe how many retards praise this, I've read badly machine-translated chinese novel written by chinese ultranationalist better than this. But I should praise you for constant release of chapters, just like how a person suffering dysentry constantly shitting himself to provide everyone fecal matters

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bruh

At that moment, a thought surfaced in my mind, illuminating my soul: if race is not a problem, why would age be?

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