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Smart. Maybe you should write a twilight story to, I will be the first to read it.
And author your story is still very good just the chapters are really short and you take a lot of time to publish a chapter but do what you want I dont judge. View More

DaoistMasterJohn: Sigh. For me personally the story had potential, but in the end it isn't for me. There are too many things that annoy me.

For one thing that he simply left his family for years, even though he said 3 months. And as a result his son died such a meaningless death. The MC knew that chosen as a sacrifice couldn't be anything good, but he kept it to himself, congratulations. If he had simply returned after 3 months or warned his family...

And then, all his time training, didn't do anything. He lost in mind arts, which he trained for years! And he was turned before he could max his powers, or gain more children for that matter. So much plot for nothing. It feels forced. To hurry his transformation, nerf the MC and let a tragedy befall him.

The MC should have simply dragged the woman to his home after his initial 2 months of training to continue it there. And the female vampire could have been friendly. Or if not, then the moment the venom destroyed the chains around his core, the venom could have been burned with his fire power, letting him stay a human without those restrains. Letting him become stronger and stronger before his transformation some day.

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 month ago

DaoistMasterJohn: Sigh. For me personally the story had potential, but in the end it isn't for me. There are too many things that annoy me.

For one thing that he simply left his family for years, even though he said 3 months. And as a result his son died such a meaningless death. The MC knew that chosen as a sacrifice couldn't be anything good, but he kept it to himself, congratulations. If he had simply returned after 3 months or warned his family...

And then, all his time training, didn't do anything. He lost in mind arts, which he trained for years! And he was turned before he could max his powers, or gain more children for that matter. So much plot for nothing. It feels forced. To hurry his transformation, nerf the MC and let a tragedy befall him.

The MC should have simply dragged the woman to his home after his initial 2 months of training to continue it there. And the female vampire could have been friendly. Or if not, then the moment the venom destroyed the chains around his core, the venom could have been burned with his fire power, letting him stay a human without those restrains. Letting him become stronger and stronger before his transformation some day.

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 month ago

Ulvr_Laoch: It was mentioned in an earlier chapter that a statue depicting the Sun God Helios would be built not far from where the empowered humans lived that he visited. Dont you think he would make a good helios what with having a fire form.

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 month ago

Sin_of_Sloth: As long as his growth never stops I will be okay with anything that happens

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 month ago

SnowLove: I don’t like the beast dudes story it’s too predictable, that’s the best way I can describe, but it was enjoyable chapter, mc was okay, feel sad he did not force the beast dude to mate with a girl to have a child then eventually a girl child is born, then he mates one of his offspring with that girl so that power is then connected to his bloodline.
This is a idea I though of while writing this comment so, take it with a grain of salt, thank you for the chapter

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 month ago

Thefirst12: Your idea is good and I hope he will listen to you.
And please if the author reading it make the chapters longer

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 month ago

Dzerxx: It'd be cool if he built himself a Kingdom. He could have his children and descendants be the Royal Family with himself as a hidden elder, it'd certainly give him resources for the near future and beyond.

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 month ago
Your idea is good and I hope he will listen to you.
And please if the author reading it make the chapters longer View More

Dzerxx: It'd be cool if he built himself a Kingdom. He could have his children and descendants be the Royal Family with himself as a hidden elder, it'd certainly give him resources for the near future and beyond.

Becoming Immortal · C13
1 month ago

Neony: Story was great then you started speeding things up created system full of plotholes and kept trying to be funny completly breaking readers immersion. I wish I had never started this book because now im just dissapointed and disgusted by your greed for more chapters. You have ruined your own boom good job

Kael Cor: A Vampire's Awakening · C18
1 month ago

RamsayEmily: Noooooooo, please don't do this to me. Oh wonderful author please don't torture us like this.😫😫😫😞
Thank you for the story so far.

Teen Wolf rebirth · C12
1 month ago
Aaahh, I didn't understood your meaning, I thought you meant that after everything is destroyed he will put it in his ring and it was stupid but it. I think your idea is good sorry about that. View More

Aedan: Hey . After cultivating. He can put it again outside. Its not like when he put it on his ring it will disappear. Betteer that destroying everything everytime he's training

Ascending the Heaven's · C13
1 month ago
because it will be even more suspicious if all the things in his room just vanish, and probably he didn't want to lie to his family. View More

Aedan: Why is it that your makin the Mc an idiot?? He did it again and again like hes a muscle head.. all the things in the room can be put in his ring. Why not do it?

Ascending the Heaven's · C13
1 month ago
that's probably the reason😂😂😂 View More

Teaalk: No wonder no one liked her in the orphanage.

Ascending the Heaven's · C13
1 month ago

Teaalk: No wonder no one liked her in the orphanage.

Ascending the Heaven's · C13
1 month ago

MastersgtJames: I'm liking the story... but these releases are so slow!!!! I need more chapters!!!
Also, Nooooooo! His son is dead!!!!
I again hope this instills in the MC to respect the dead, and to not kill humans if he can help it. if he can't then to do so painlessly. so tired of sociopathic MC's

Becoming Immortal · C12
1 month ago

Lost_Reborn: Make sure his son is not dead.
He might be cruel/ruthless but protective of his family and after thousands of years his clan.
Also he/his clan creates a worldwide network throughout the history.

Becoming Immortal · C12
1 month ago
Yes, it's a really good story so dont drop it. I will wait for the next chapter man. View More
Teen Wolf rebirth · C9
1 month ago
Dont do time skip before you finish building the beginning, like he starts a clan/organization or something. And dont do a very big time skip, if you decide to listen to me show us how his clan/organization gets stronger and overcome hardships slowly. But in the end do what the **** you want just make sure not to disappoint us, man!! YOUR STORY IS EXTREMELY GOODDDD!!! View More
Becoming Immortal · C9
1 month ago
I recommend you to base your novel on "the world online" because to my opinion it's the best game novel. It would be awesome if someone will do it! If you dont know search for it in the internet and read it, I recommend it!!!! View More
Looking for help to create a novel of the videogame · C0
1 month ago
I am still waiting... please give us more chapters!!!!!!!!!!! View More
All Existence · C98
4 months ago
You need to continue this novel becous your idea is amazing. I want to read a story like that for a change!!!! View More
Tales of the World Sovereign · C1
5 months ago
Call him Irinoi-shū. Its meaning is Supreme ruler! View More
Silvered Pirate (One Piece) · C6
5 months ago
Just for you to know your novel is still in my librery cous it was so good so keep going. I will never get it out of it. I will wait!!! View More
All Existence · C98
5 months ago
Dont drop the story! Its so good!!! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more View More
Universal Mercenary System · C17
5 months ago
Reading Status: C9
I want another chapter the the fastest possible!!
I will send power stones.
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Supernatural Strongest Being
5 months ago
Reading Status: C13
Pleassssssse don't drop this story!!!!! It's one of the best novels I ever read and it's even in my library, So keep going!!!

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World of Thrones
6 months ago
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WebWeb123: Double release

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan · C0
8 months ago
Shut the **** up! The man has life. If you have a problem with that you don't have to read the novel🖕 View More

Lucifer_light: Fuck you

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan · C0
8 months ago

Thefirst12: This is one of the best original novels ever read.
It's refreshing to see a protagonist that his only desire is to get stronger for immortality no matter what. I recommend to read this novel aspishely because of the writing quality. Have fun!!!!

All Existence
11 months ago
Yeah I didn't understand anything View More
Unlimited Fantasy World · C0
11 months ago
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