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Ok. continue with the good work and i'll continue with suggestions
When we entered. A little girl immediately jumped towards Yurine-sama. Her pink hair swaying left and right, tied in a ponytail. She looked like at the age of elementary kids, but she should be an old hag if you knew. As an former elite seven now a grandmaster she should be very powerful— ah, she's too close to Yurine-sama i want to smack her away.
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Fantasy · CieLL
It's just that all the protagonists of other novels start with max s*x stats, and that doesn't make any sense, cause they aren't supposed to be used to having a d*ck. I hope you can make more than one chapter a week in the future, but if not, is understandable. I alredy imagine the scene where Yurine refuses the training iniatially but accepts unwillingly after she knows it's her father's will. You could make her shy of staying naked in front of the headmaster at first, but, after sessions of the training, she slowly loses her shyness, even talking to her while having an erection. You could make her with phimosis too if you want, cause she possibly didn't make the exercises to avoid it, and the first session of the headmaster would be to correct that. You could make the first s*x class to be a physical assessment of her capabilities. The muscle training could be normal workouts with the supervision of the headmaster dressed as a cute gym loli and Yurine completely naked (is a lewd novel after all). She could use healing magic to speed the recovery of Yurine so that she has faster results. Yurine would get toned fast, but not overly muscular. It would be fun to see Kuroe going to gym to visit her master and be shocked to see the headmaster with a smug expression while Yurine bangs a hip thrust machine with her c*ck, making sounds of metal hitting metal and making the machine bend. I could talk about tests for her to be graded along the way, but this text is already too long. I hope you continue with the good work and include this soon in your novel
When we entered. A little girl immediately jumped towards Yurine-sama. Her pink hair swaying left and right, tied in a ponytail. She looked like at the age of elementary kids, but she should be an old hag if you knew. As an former elite seven now a grandmaster she should be very powerful— ah, she's too close to Yurine-sama i want to smack her away.
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Fantasy · CieLL
It would be cool to have more futas besides Yurine. For example, you could make a contrast between the headmaster and her d*ck, she being a cheerful and cute loli and having a huge c*ck and big stamina. also, i think it would be cool if Yurine has sex classes with the headmaster with the justification of ensure her capability of spread her lineage. She could have an endurace training, to prevent her of c*mming too fast, a stamina training to prevent go limp fast, a c*m training eensure she c*ms enough and with enough thickness tto ensure she could impregnate someone, and, for the last, a muscle training to avoid she getting tired fast. Initially, you could make her bad in all these subjects, like her being a quickshot, getting limp fast and c*mming too little and too thin and slowly progressing tto her having improvements in these areas. I even have an idea for the c*m training: the headmaster could order her to fill a small basin with c*m and slowly progress in size as she c*ms more. when she finally fills every size, she would start again but filling then with thick c*m, which would be harder
When we entered. A little girl immediately jumped towards Yurine-sama. Her pink hair swaying left and right, tied in a ponytail. She looked like at the age of elementary kids, but she should be an old hag if you knew. As an former elite seven now a grandmaster she should be very powerful— ah, she's too close to Yurine-sama i want to smack her away.
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Fantasy · CieLL
Thanks for the chapter. I wonder where's the lewd scene...
ch 0 3 Cliché 2, Your very info dumpers! Plus, Lewd scene*! Uhehe..?
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Fantasy · CieLL
An idea. We NEED a bath scene hahahahaha, but not with s*x, just teasing and Kuroe admiring her mistress's growth, crying silent tears when she sees the size of her c*ck, making a naughty remark at how big it got, like how her little snake turned into a mighty dragon or simply yelling "huge" faking a shocked expression to make Yurine embarassed. She could tease her making sexy poses just to see how big she gets when erect
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Fantasy · CieLL
So two big chested girls with the black haired having short black hair and the other one similar to Lumine? understood. You could have made at least a chapter with a resume of the time before the timeskip, like the protagonist learning how to be a girl and having difficulties with his new sex, like him getting a scare of his (now her) first period and the growing of her body ( as a guy, having big boobs would be strange to someone who had nothing his entire former life). I recomend to remake the first chapter to improve the worldbuiding by showing the moment of her reincarnation (i know its cliche, but it works pretty well) and telling what family she serves, from which kingdom, who are her parents, etc. This story has great potential, i hope you continue
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Fantasy · CieLL
we need a description of their appearences and age
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Fantasy · CieLL
thanks for the chapter
ch 0 2 Cliché 1.1 Copy of, no. 10 years of skip.
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Fantasy · CieLL
I silently weeped, as i wiped a tear running down my cheeks. I can't help but cry, as it was bigger than my past life's.. i know mine's small but reducing it to atoms is too much.
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Fantasy · CieLL
iit would be cool tto sometimes have the protagonist's pov
"H-huh? Ah, yes?"
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Fantasy · CieLL
Big d*ck loli, noice. I hope for some bath scenes where the maid tends for her mistress's c*ck or her spying the loli f*cking an older maid. The loli could learn how to have sex with the older maid, being a quickshot and getting soft to quickly iniatily, but f"cking her to submission when she trains her stamina enough.
I silently weeped, as i wiped a tear running down my cheeks. I can't help but cry, as it was bigger than my past life's.. i know mine's small but reducing it to atoms is too much.
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Fantasy · CieLL
Thanks for the chapter. The story looks interesting. continue with the good work
ch 0 1 Cliché 1 Is this a prologue or no?
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Fantasy · CieLL
we need the source or a illustration
It did, however, make her butt… larger and more finely shaped than most; making any swimsuit or bikini she chose to become more… erotic than they were meant to be.
Villain Retirement
Urban · Romeru
is she nude? why would she be nude...
"Can you repeat what you said?" The woman then glanced at Dick, before walking towards the desk that was at the end of the room; crossing her legs as she sat on top of the desk, not even caring that all of her skin was showing.
Villain Retirement
Urban · Romeru
when did she mention a daughter?
My lips were sealed from talking as Alexia took them, her fire-red hair filling my vision. "You are mean; you left me with a man back in the dwarven lands without remorse as I was left sexually unsatisfied for years after meeting you. Do you know how hard that was for me? I wanted you every night after you shamelessly seduced me without remorse. Our child even waits back to meet you again, and you are shamelessly moving on without shame again!" Alexia cried out tears in her eyes, "I also understand why your doing it. I will be following you into war, but I want to see our little girl Fia while we are back in our homeland. You will meet your daughter you shamelessly left me with when you left." Alexia retook my lips, "How did I fall for someone as shameless as you?" Alexia backed off and looked around everyone nodding at her last statement, I realized.
Futanari System
Fantasy · Madjic
you forgot to show it, author
I stopped crying and looked up. My brain registered something weird in that. That data didn't make sense. "I am not lying. I will show it to you when we get back. I have had a test subject ready to show you. I was even planning on looking more into it. The data simply doesn't make sense. In all cases where we tried to make the test subject release an excessive amount of sperm, they reacted violently. They would refuse to even acknowledge even the simplest of the symptoms until after it was treated. They would refuse to take the strong aphrodisiac necessary to cure them of the problem, though."
Futanari System
Fantasy · Madjic
his super power is don't die from lack of fat in organism
In the head seat, an old man with grey hair and a grey beard was sitting. He has wrinkles over his face, but his body was far from ordinary. His body was perfectly muscular with 0% fat.
Villain's Journey Towards Destruction
Fantasy · Alekzi
Tiebreaker looks like a c*ck name just like doorknocker, hahahahaha.
ch 126 Tiebreaker
Futanari System
Fantasy · Madjic
Author, do you think that would be interesting to explore the sexual capabillities of Chelsea's children? by the common sense of the bunny kin, as soon as they can get erect, produce sperm or have a thick enough c*m to impregnate women, they would be sent to breed. There, they probably would need to get trained, but that's not the focus of this post. And also, i think it would be cool if every children of hers had a distinct characteristic depending of their mother's race, like the succubus having a bigger stamina, the centarus being bipedal and having a horse c*ck, etc.
ch 113 Queen Mira
Futanari System
Fantasy · Madjic
thanks for the chapter
ch 0 4 Cliché 3.1 Gacha papers.
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Fantasy · CieLL