That's because many authors 'force the plot' and have the characters make decisions they wouldn't make in reality.
'I had liked him from the start... even when he was a stupid fool... yet why did I throw tantrums or push him away?'
Urban · Lord_Raven
I'm pretty sure more than two people died, but I guess he doesn't see 'men' as people.
A gun formed with the resolve never to forget his past mistakes and naivety, marking the day of two tragic victims' deaths due to his failure and marking the day when Seth Darkwood vowed that his past self died.
Urban · Lord_Raven
This guy is a very bad shot with a gun.
The dog fell after the fifth shot as his pistol became useless without ammo; he needed to find a way to create more bullets once this side story was done and over, but right now, he was tired and annoyed.
Urban · Lord_Raven
No, firing a loud gun in the middle of the night is doing that.
'This fucker is bringing more trouble!'
Urban · Lord_Raven
It's easy for cringe pick-up lines like that to work when you're the most handsome man in the world.
"Maybe... Or it's because I want to seem that way in front of a lovely woman like you."
Urban · Lord_Raven
Who says, "urinate" themselves? Has anyone every said that in RL?
'It seems we should call it quits after a little more; otherwise, my princess might urinate herself.'
Urban · Lord_Raven
I highly doubt she's a skilled bodyguard.
That was another banger of an ending for the chapter.
[Tainted a virgin nurse's mind - now she will hope that all men be like you naked and be forever disappointed: +10 VP]
Urban · Lord_Raven
But the author was the one that decided not to make her a harem member. Something I find hard to believe when said MC already had a harem.
There was no mention of her in the novel after that, likely because they regarded her as a non-heroine, so the author discarded her.
Urban · Lord_Raven
Then how is this character an antagonist? Only mobs die in one chapter.
He discovered, to his dismay, that he had assumed the role of the novel's antagonist, a character doomed to meet his demise in the second chapter.
Urban · Lord_Raven
Ah, so the author is too lazy to develop the MC's character?
[But the system will stop you from suffering PTSD, Extreme Stress and mental duress when needed.]
Urban · Lord_Raven
What? I thought she also crashed and hit a car.
[She was the one that tried to resuscitate you...]
Urban · Lord_Raven
The MC's inner monologue was waaay too long.
ch 0 4 Chapter4-A Level 1 Antagonist? Discerning the Protagonist!
Fantasy · Sugar_Chestnuts
The writing style of this story gives me a headache. I'm out. Good luck everyone!
ch 0 6 Mental Strength
Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
Oh, so rent is the same is this parallel world where an apocalypse happened?
His mother worked hard for both of them, but their house rent took up 90% of her income.
Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
I'm just wondering how he didn't accidently use them when he 'woke up.'
'I will find a job where I can use my super strength.'
Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
This guy sounds like a nerd.
Rudy and Rize had a bad relationship. They often called each other out to humiliate themselves. Rize was frustrated and angry with Rudy since the first day of school when Rudy called her out to point out her mistake. However, it turned out she wasn't wrong, and Rudy was forced to apologize to her.
Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
The author seems to gloss over a lot of the details.
'This is the last period. I can't wait to go home and meet my mother. It has been years since I last saw her.'
Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
I almost barfed inside my mouth at that line.
'Can I tell her... about tonight? Will she judge me?'
Supreme Villain: Help! Yandere Heroines Keep Stalking Me!
Urban · Lord_Raven