Jonathan_Dorsey

2yr

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I get the feeling that the gender assignment isn't the best in this translation, but I have no idea.

In her previous life, she had to wear a safety helmet when she rode a bike. In this life, she had to take some safety measures.

Eastern · Get to the Point

3yr

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I figured it out when they got to the academy with Julian and kleo. the kicker for me was the throwaway comment about kleos romantic life.

ch 69 My name is

Fantasy · Avan

3yr

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Great work. Just blasted through all the available chapters and I like the flow and writing style.

ch 29 Elder's Respite

Fantasy · Avan

3yr

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Li is good at thinking on his feet, despite all the other things going wrong with his initial plan. It makes a fun rule for that form too

ch 146 The Creature

Fantasy · John_Doever

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