Solomon_David

1mth

Commented

He's happy because he is a M.

Vela wanted to understand why this boy could stand up and smile, to show enjoyment when she saw her magic making his body burn, his blood boil, and his bones break repeatedly!

Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix

Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer

Solomon_David

1mth

Commented

I guess he' a M.

'When she used her full strength, I felt my weaknesses more than ever, but the exhilaration of fighting her, feeling my chest torn by her blade and desperate to counter felt amazing.'

Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix

Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer

Solomon_David

2mth

Commented

I wonder if by 'devour' does he meant eat? Eating metal wouldn't be that pleasant.

However, though the Nine Cauldron Skypassing Spell was an unparalleled skill, it was extremely strict to cultivate. The most important condition was to devour high-quality Pill Cauldrons.

The Extreme Alchemist of the Mighty Cauldron

Eastern · The Eternal Green Lotus

Solomon_David

2mth

Commented

In a lot of martial novels the translation of KNIFE is more accurately translated as blade. I think "blade intent" would be a better translation than knife feeling.

The first stage of Knife Feeling is the realm of Knife Power.

Clan Leader: My strength equals to that of the entire clan

Eastern · MoBei is MoBei

Solomon_David

3mth

Commented

Yes! I'm pretty sure he said 50 silvers per armor.

Previously, the Su Sacred Clan sold the Metal Bone Construct for 5 silver coins, while they sold theirs, ranging from 20 to 30 silver coins.

Eternal life begins with saving my clan

Eastern · _EverSmile

Solomon_David

7mth

Commented

I'm guessing this is happening in a different dimention from ours. I've built computers b4 and even though top grade parts are expensive, you can put compatible ones together.

"What is this computer for? If it's just for gaming, the top-notch graphics card and the top-notch processor would create a conflict. As far as the current market is concerned, no motherboards could be compatible with both top-notch graphics cards and processors."

My Account Banned, I Drove Game Developers Crazy

Urban · Heavenly Eye Demonic Dragon

Solomon_David

1yr

Replied to Solomon_David

Correction to my previous review: Although the author DOES sometimes use the wrong pronouns, at least the gender is usually correct.

Myth Beyond Heaven

Eastern · CloudBeneathMoon

Solomon_David

1yr

Posted

An entertaining story overall. However, the grammer is a bit lacking. At least the right pronouns are used. A lot of novels that are translated mix up the he, her, she, and him pronouns, making me wonder if the person is a hermaphrodite. At least, so far, I haven't encountered this problem in this novel yet. If you don't mind the grammatical errors of using the wrong tense, which are the majority of the mistakes, you might enjoy this fantasy novel.