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MotivatedSloth

MotivatedSloth

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Replied to DeJeL

Yeah, ngl, wasn't quite sure how exactly to write this part. Will try to rewrite it at a better time

The whole front part of this area opened up, turning out to be nothing more but the upper jaw of the monster. And as it opened up its mouth, turning itself further two meters longer than its already impressive posture… 

My 7th Hero Summoning Brought Me Home To Fight The System?!

My 7th Hero Summoning Brought Me Home To Fight The System?!

Urban · MotivatedSloth

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Replied to SMiLeY1262

Bua-bye!

'Sure, I can sue them…' I thought, only to fall back and rest against the side of my bed. "Haa… As if."

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

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Replied to Shadow0101

Correct.

Still, I had no plans of letting Fay's mother go. But while Fay's position in my heart was already solidified, it was also different from the place I predicted her mother would soon take. 

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

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Replied to PaAaAnDa

Or this dissonance is a result of something that goes deeper into the story than what you are supposed to know at this stage :D

But the presence of that stinky aura wasn't something I could bring up with Makary. Not now, when he was just a contact of convenience, ready to turn his back on me the second it proved more beneficial to work against me than with me. 

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSloth
Replied to Hunter_Roberts

Ba-bay

"Fay can't do much," she spoke, lowering her head and grasping her hands into fists. "But Fay wants to, at least, groom Peter too!" 

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

MotivatedSloth
Replied to Sim_Um

Honest answer? I have no idea. So far, there were three characters that I initially designed to be 2nd FL (romance-wise), one I ended up discarding, second had her role changed and developed, while the third is a part of a much greater plot and I'm way off deciding her exact role in it (in a sense, whether she will sleep with MC or not is 100% minor, irrelevant stuff). I do have "seeds" as in, characters that will be close enough to MC to classify as FL but whose roles I have yet to fully decide on. For example (and 100% detached from the story) I might have an encounter with, let's say, MC and an orphan girl from a nearby village. But by the time MC reaches the village, meets with that orphan girl etc, I can pretty much decide that this village could become a source of a great arc, have it play a major plot in the story or be a "sacrificial lamb" for the story's sake. And with the village plot developing far beyond the confines of (Mc goes there, does stuff, shows how cool he is, leaves never to return), the role of the village orphan girl also changes. What start as potential lewd bait might turn into an oracle of a forgotten deity, cursed child with great destiny or some kind of pivotal element of the village arc. In other words, I do have certain, rigid structure to the story. Certain developments, encounters and twists are planned weeeeeeell ahead... But when it comes to the roles character serve, I'm doing my best to build them beyond the level of cuddly and lewd release. The very main female started like that only for me to develop her waaaaay beyond the initial bounds she was designed to fill. Main story framework is set, but its the characters that fill it with their personalities, desires, drives and goals. And while I have like 4-5 more females that will come in contact with MC in the near future of the plot (one of which just did), one of them has eyes for someone else, another one is this, next one is that (censor for spoilers)... Leaving me with like 2 more characters that I introduced that CAN, but DOESN'T HAVE TO turn into MC's lovers. WIll it happen? I have no idea. I'm merely a tool that this story uses to reveal itself to the world. If it will fit all the characters involved, then any development is possible. If it doesn't fit, then no matter how horny I am on the day I sit down to write, I'm not going to let cum get to my brain and result in me spoiling the story for the momentary satisfaction of writing porn fic. TL:DR There is no answer. If it will fall in line with my characters to form harem, they will. If it will go against their believes, goals, morals or decision, they won't. In a sense, it's up to the story and the characters, not me, mere author of said story, anymore :D

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSloth
Replied to Gyratos

Partially true, but only partially. One example is never enough to prove a point (circumstantial evidence) but it's also enough to bury an incomplete/wrong theory (proof that goes against the grit) In other words, you can thousands of other people can be fine moving about with wet hair, but it doesn't serve as proof. It can serve to disprove the broad statement that going that having wet hair and going out ALWAYS makes you sick, same like me falling sick because of it cannot serve to prove the above but disprove the fact there's no correlation. Still, to move on from judging purely by words and enter the space of talking about the actual topic: - Only those very unfortunate in life or those who participate in war (or medics in general) have seen brain. Does it mean that those people are the only ones CAPABLE to perceive the existence of brain? No. There is a lot of "broad knowledge" that stems from the fact that a certain authority declared something and people trust in that authority enough to assume their claim is on point or, at the very least, not fraudulent. Thta's the only way in which knowledge and wisdom can operate now that we reached waaaaay beyond the point where a single man can possess all the knowledge there is in the world (the last time it actually happened was early on in XVII-XVIII, not exactly sure - but since then, the knowledge humanity possess simply grew to be too wide and deep for it to ever happen again). What I want to say is that by those "common teachings" of "not going outside/standing by the window with your hair wet" might not exactly be the one and only reason why people fall sick. But, when we bring it back to a reasonable level, I believe it's a massive factor. I'm not a medic/doctor/biologist or someone anywhere near those jobs with my fields of expertise. So, with the knowledge of the world that I have, I assume having wet hair on a cold air means there's greater rate at which the heat is sucked away from one's head (because water is the better transmitted of the temperature than just air) and that, in one way or form, can weakened one's body enough to let the viruses/bacteria etc we already have in our body to act up, conversely, have the body's response to the sudden drop of temperature in a way that showcases as symptoms we usually associate with cold/sickness. Am I correct in that line of thinking? I have no idea. This might be "it" or a complete load of BS. But I don't really care about the explanation. Enough of sources I consider to be authoritative within this specific field has marked the action of meeting cold air with wet hair to be dangerous to one's well-being/health. And because I trust in those authorities, I do and shall continue to believe that to be the case, irregardless of whether or not there are tens, hundreds, thousands or even million of people that are not affected by this issue. Who knows? Maybe it's not a bad idea to have wet hair in the middle of the desert/in the middle of a tropical heatwave/in the middle of hot period of Japan's weather/in the middle of a swimmingpool. There can be any number of circumstances that affect this rule, from genetics, biology, clothes, current state of health, outside weather, usual weather we are used to. Maybe even the fact that you go outside a lot with wet hair allowed you and your family to develop immunity to it, as in, get your body used to such state? I'm not an expert of the topic nor am I going to have this level of detailed discussion whenever this topic goes back around so, unless at some point I will have to learn all there is about this topic, I shall keep putting my trust into the wisdom of people in the knowledge of which I trust (one of which happens to be my older sister who just so happens to be a doctor :D) :3

"Can you stand up and sit on the edge of the bed now?" I asked, already rushing back to the bathroom to find the hand-held hair dryer that I low-key stole from my aunt's house. It was a cheap replacement for what my mom used to have, and something I couldn't afford to miss if I didn't want to get sick every time after washing my own hair and having no other choice but to wait for them to dry themselves. 

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

MotivatedSloth
Replied to NovaEre

That's because this isn't your typical wuxia story but a novel that takes "realism" of the given rules quite damn seriously.

Crushing the cultivator's soft throat with all the might of his nanite-reinforced grip… he simply swung him to the back, using his body as a ballast to eject himself forward. 

Lord of the Rifts

Lord of the Rifts

Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

MotivatedSloth
Replied to Soonami

Because both wisdom and inteligence refer to specific ranges in which Peter's brain can perform. It's explained later on in detail, but it's not universal "get smart and cunning" type of stat. (This point is actually one of the base rules of the deep lore that I still have yet to fully explore 400 chapters deep, but well, that's my love for deep stories). As for the boredom early on - you are perfectly justified, not gonna spew BS to try to cover that fact. Knowing my tendency to overcomplicate stuff and throw readers right into the deep water (just like I plan to do with my next story that shall start 10 years after where a typical story of that genre would begin), I did my best to make things simple and easy to follow... and as I've already admitted to multiple times - I ended up overcorrecting by a huge margin. In all honesty, my years-long habits still kicked in, pushing me to ramp up the pace after going premium, so I would suggest you save some fast passes for when you reach it, to judge how the story goes from there on, rather than in the part where I kept telling myself to make it as idiotically simple (and thus boring, which I realized a bit too late) as possible. Alternatively, if you want a story with a much steeper pace and, strangely enough, quite a similar but much darker setting, you might want to give my freshest novel, "Lord of the Rifts" a try.

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What is it like to be a scribe? Is it good? In my opinion it's not about being good or not good. If I were to say what I esteem the most in life, I would say - people. People, who gave me a helping hand when I was a mess, when I was alone. And what's interesting, the chance meetings are the ones that influence our lives. The point is that when you profess certain values, even those seemingly universal, you may not find any understanding which, let me say, which helps us to develop. I had luck, let me say, because I found it. And I'd like to thank life. I'd like to thank it - life is singing, life is dancing, life is love. Many people ask me the same question, but how do you do that? where does all your happiness come from? And i replay that it's easy, it's cherishing live, that's what makes me build machines today, and tomorrow... who knows, why not, i would dedicate myself to do some community working and i would be, wham, not least... planting .... i mean... carrots.

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