Thanks for the suggestion! For now, I’m focusing on writing and building the story. If I ever consider adaptations later on, I’ll make an announcement on the platform. Appreciate the interest!
Hi Lizzie, thanks for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts — I’m glad the story resonated with you! I’ll keep working hard to make the next chapters even more immersive.
i don't know how to review but i still want to give some feedback. 1. character development needs some more depth i know its Fanfic so background is there but MC development is vague and lots of things are left to imagination make MC feel distant from reader. 2. Dialogue is too lengthy and have too many innuendo making it stiff and unnatural especially the MC and Rhaenyra. 3. MC interactions feel forced or skipped in favor of story progression. Thanks for sharing you story and i hope my feedback could help
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should i expect the protagonist to talk this way all through the story it feels so unnatural
The house with red door was in Bravos
Her earliest memories were of a modest house in Pentos with a red door. She and her brother had lived there with two protectors and a Septa, named Moelle. The latter had become more of a companion and teacher than a religious guide. Daenerys had studied the Seven-Pointed Star with her but had not been impressed by these so-called Gods. Life in that small house had been boring. They never had enough coin and at the end, Ser Darry their main protector had been half-blind and ailing.
Legacy of Fire and Ice
Book&Literature · MythosMixer
No , its actually coming from حرم a root for a word used as sacred not حرام as a word forbidden for example this word is used for al Kaba which is called the sacred house البيت الحرام
In the Ottoman empire, the sultans usually had their consort on the Harem system which from the Arabic word Haram means forbidden.
Reincarnated as Selim III
History · Valerian07
beside it sounds feminine, especially coming from a knight like William.
She knew a little about the city from what Varys would tell her during his visits, but nothing could compare to seeing it in person. "My gosh what is this place," asked Ser Willem Darry.
Building an Empire in Game of Thrones (REWORKED VERSION)
Fantasy · Dr_Dred
She is Rhaenys most likely.
Maekar turned and watched the scene unfold. There was his goblet of wine, the deep red liquid shimmering slightly in the candlelight. A figure moved into view—a woman, a very familiar woman.
The Son of Ice and Fire (Jon Snow SI)
TV · Illusiveone
the problem here is that Vhagar is still alive when you call Vermithor and silver wing old then Vhagar is ancient while the TV series would lead you there but that wasn't true as Cannibal was said to be older than Vhagar and some say he is just younger than Balarion, i guess Martin sucks with dragon ages but you make it even more confusing i will stop at that not to ruin your writing i actually rather enjoying it
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original The Mnemosyne Protocol
Ethan Hale never believed in destiny — only data. A lonely analyst in modern London, he joins a secret “neural history” experiment known as The Mnemosyne Protocol, designed to explore the echoes of ancient consciousness. But when the system malfunctions, Ethan’s mind is torn from his body and thrown into the dying days of the Trojan War — inside the skin of a Greek soldier destined to die. What begins as an experiment becomes a pilgrimage through time itself. Each leap thrusts Ethan into another fractured era — from myth to empire, from kings to heretics — where memory, guilt, and fate intertwine. As he unravels the mystery of Mnemosyne, Ethan must face a terrifying question: Are these echoes of history... or are they fragments of his own soul?17 Chs 3 Collections
Hi, thank you for reaching out! I appreciate the offer, but I’m currently focusing on building the novel first. I’ll reach out later if I decide to explore manga or promotion options. Thanks again!
The Mnemosyne Protocol
Fantasy · Aetheris