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no problem, i have read a lot fan fic about hunter exam. and most of the fanfic got dropped after 4rd exam. i hope you can keep continue the story and finish it. thx for the chapter

please make the devil fruit have unique power. that make your fan fic different than the other fan fic. thank for the chapter

it still the same

thank for the chapter. what year when goku come to earth? is it still far?

where the chapter?

kwkwkwkwk it was really funny. thanks for the chapter

well, how about make MC more smart. he dont need to help fisher tiger to escape because he can do it alone. make boa 3 sister fall in love with him because his kind to them. well they are still kid when they got captured so it not to hard to there trust.

thank for the chapter! i want to know where is mira and her granma go? i miss her. can you make ryuu playing with his sister more? hehehe...

well remembering it was his first time he should act more innocent there to build more tension, and she will teaching him about the pleasure ***. thanks for the new chapter

can you put status of his spirit bone to, i remember he have spirit bone in his head you didn't elaborated it fuction yet. and his 3rb spirit ring skill please put the explaination in the status to. thanks for the chapter.

great expleination there.

thx for the new chapter, make the MC more pervert and dominan when he handling the woman please. also keep tracking the point system he got after the time skip to, and what item being selled in system shop.