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I like the story so far, i do read the MTL version. Compare to MTL version you mentioned the one you create are entirely new story and more interesting, you should mention you inspired from the MTL version, rather mention you translated from there. The synopsis also different, over there (MTL) the MC super OP and every time 'Golden List' show up, the MC will get twice the reward or more. In fact, the 'Golden List' more a less MC own system like Rebate sort of system. So, hope you don't drop the story.

wow, its very rare for the Author to give his own novel 3 star since this your original creation and i dare to say that as i did not see any on MTL website and i will read for that, give a good work

its seem straight from MTL but for other reader to understand here some references; Master Naruto = Third Hokage Xi Rihong/Red = Kurenai Yuhi Hope the author/editor can edit it so more reader can understand more and read enjoyable. Currently at Chapter 8

You are not wrong, you can read on translation otaku but the finish one should be readable at pat reon, so this one here kinda copy n paste just that not very far, hahahaha

The story quite interesting, even thou at early stage of the novel, its look alike the same for most fan fiction novel, so what i wondering when will be the 2nd spirit Qilin and 3rd spirit (i forgot) will show up in the plot, are there going to have 10k year old for the 1st ring?100k/200k/1m if that happen kinda to OP. Just keep update the story will become ur fan