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I feel like you have written this in third person point of view
ch 23 Orochimaru
Naruto: Mekka Junrei
Anime & Comics · angel_bastudas
Start of every fan fic, cant you choose another place
his parents got Married in Kalos, then moved to Kanto... guess where... Yes! the Pallet town.
Pokemon: A New Journey (Up for adoption)
Anime & Comics · Idk_wqe2
Osiris is also the god of the underworld
From Osiris I had gained the Authority of Life, granting me a regeneration capable of healing me from the most brutal of injuries and the power to heal others from wound or disease.
The Campione of Marvel!
Movies · GabrielRott
1. Starter: Tyranitar (Rock/Dark) - Land Powerhouse 2. Houndoom (Fire/Dark) 3. Hydreigon (Dark/Dragon) - Air Powerhouse 4. Greninja (Water/Dark) - Speed 5. Drapion (Dark/Poison) - Defence 6. Absol or Umbreon (Dark) - Always out
ch 0 6 Poll for team comfirmation.
Pokemon: Prince of Darkness
Anime & Comics · Ethereal_Writer
When will his starter hatch from its egg?
ch 21 CHAPTER 20: SAMSON OAK
Pokemon: Creation and Adventures
Anime & Comics · Jogarp
I don't understand that last sentence?
"It is not normal for Alec to have been able to feel the emotions of the ninetales at such a distant distance, besides those images he saw, he would understand if it were some psychic pokemon, but Alola ninetales is not this case..., *sigh*, Professor Nirio, what is what you did with Alec?"
Pokemon: Creation and Adventures
Anime & Comics · Jogarp
Stop using "she"
Thus, Alec became the housewife when she was in the professor's house, and his brilliant apprentice when she was in the laboratory.
Pokemon: Creation and Adventures
Anime & Comics · Jogarp
sharingan mate get it right
The first thing Tang Hao saw was Tang Zuo's Shalunyan. He felt a terrible aura in it, like a demon. Tang Hao used his soul power to see the true face of this Shalunyan. Item.
The Scarlet Demon Doulo Dalu
Anime & Comics · dominant
to OP should of made it Water Dragon Or Lightning Dragon instead
[Devil Fruit: Mythical Zoan: Dragon Type: Dragon God]
Into One Piece
Anime & Comics · Dark_Vader98
Overall, it is a good story, but is your MC gender challenged? If not and he is a male use the words he or sorcerer which implies that he is a male. If your MC is a female call her something else not Ron and use she or Sorceress.
ch 0 4 4. Advertise on the board
A Witcher Tale: Ron Aydesson
Book&Literature · Aydehan
a male is called a sorcerer and a female is called a sorceress, I am guessing your Main character is gender challenged?
Ron would explode when he heard those words. He was finally graduating from Ban Art Sorceress school and eagerly awaiting the next words.
A Witcher Tale: Ron Aydesson
Book&Literature · Aydehan
Translation
You should mention a Mandibuzz and Braviery, to avoid confusion.
Meanwhile, the egg that Bill had gifted to Tommy hatched shortly after the battle. Turned out, it was an egg of a Mandibuzz, a dark and flying type pokemon from Unova region.
Monsters in my Pocket
Anime & Comics · manny0101
Why does the king have a Chinese name and the rest English names?
ch 0 4 A Gun!
The Golden Throne
Fantasy · jdbeue
mate please, look up the correct moves please don't name them yourself. Oh, by the way its a shiny gastly
MI AVENTURA POKEMON
Anime & Comics · AngelVillalobos288