Alokael - Profile

Look who is back. Glad your health is holding up. Take a hat off, and a 5 star review as a welcome back gift. Please next time let us know with an announcement or something, before you go MIA.

Well, I certainly wasn't expecting this kind of novel from you. I have been following the author's Original novel from time to time. It's quite enjoyable as it deals with multiple perspectives of the characters. But this one was a shocker. Can't believe written by the same man. But I have read the first few chapters and they have an unique feel to it. Well friend I wish you good luck with your new work but I hope you will not drop your original.

Other than the stability of the updates I didn't find anything good about the story. The name interchange is just horrendous to say the least. Gave me an headache. The story has potential but I hardly believe this is readable. Suggesting the author to re- edit or higher someone to edit the story for him. Because at the moment this story might just be something to garner people's curses.