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The idea was good, but the MC is too boring. By chapter 66, I decided to quit reading. MC is just acting too aloft, and he still wants to pretend like his early 20's.

This is my second favourite kingdom building with technology after the tyranny of steel. however, i feel like the novel seems short. i wish it somehow reach somewhere around 1200 chapters. But still, i liked the progress of technology development even though they skipped some parts of the development. I would love it more if they were able to release and utilise technology like UAV Dorones, Internet, Starlink, Hubble Telescope, M821A Barrett Sniper Riffle, Phalanx CIWS, Iron Dome, Arcade Game, Console Platform at least like PS1 to 5, Renewable Energy such as Solar, Mobile Phones, B2 Spirit, FA22 Raptor, and M1A2 Abram MBT. I would also be better of the MC has more Nobel Prize by developing more vaccines and medicines. More enemies such as cultists, extremists jihadist, rival country with nazi era technology like v2 rockets, and other terrorist organisations to further expand the novel because 400+ chapters seems really small.

It would have been perfect if Gaya and Darklord thingy did not exist, and if he just focused on being a hitman and awesome. You add drak lord and system to the mix. The story becomes too linear and predictable, plus you included cliché romance. Hitman should not have any personal relationships because it is a liability or a source of weakness. also, being an elite assassin from the world of modern science and great history, he should continue to use that as an advantage he should have a different mentality or mindset to others. he should have good tactics, theory, martial arts, and technology to unlock or invent. I quit at 410. i can no longer continue to read this as i no longer enjoy the direction of the novel.

It started well, but after a while, it became a novel about orgy. Though I used to love the gun porn, zombie slaying, scavenging new loots, base building, shooting and looting, hack and slash with amazing katana techniques. I like the sex or orgy part, but too much of it is sickening. This novel needs to focus more on killing new zombies or adventuring. basically, it needs more DAKKA and slightly reduce the slaanesh corruption but more on killing the xenos, purging the unclean and burning the heretics kind of shit.

Cheap system. this would have been more fun if he had more side quests and special quests to do with additional a little bit of cultivation, levelling, exploration, and loot. but i guess the authors creativity is a little bit lacking, and mostly, he relies on mount and blade contents.

It started well, but it became too boring to read when they started rebuilding zanzan somewhere 200 to 300ish.. R18 chapters are also becoming too generic and boring, and sometimes, i just skip most of it. A few R18 is ok, but too much is bad. well, I mainly read this novel for technology development , and im very disappointed. I was hoping somewhere close to tyranny of steel like development, but it is far from that. I hope he can introduce black powder soon. i mean, it should be his priority. also, why should he worry about trades in nearby provinces when he can just build a boat with some canons on it and trade somewhere far while creating a strong naval force. after all, he has his own port.

This is becoming too cringe. After reaching somewhere chapter 300 to 514, I feel like i lost interest. The romance is too lame that i wished he did not include it. I like empire building like tyranny of steel but this!? I feel like eating garbage.

not worth the money. he has good luck but its kinda useless its more like a decoration only. also nothing is special about the MC I was expecting that he was a pro player but in the end he relying only on his OP weapon that he got by chance from special quest.

Wow! this is really a big surprise and hidden gem indeed! Awesome MC with great skills and knowledge and perfect support characters also. I really enjoyed the 750+ chapters. I also love the assortment of weapons and guns after all i really love guns specially AR15's and I also enjoy collecting knives and EDC items and tactical related apparels, bags, shoes and gloves such as brands from 5.11, Helkion and Mechanix wear. My only issue is that the update is too slow for me and cannot catch up on how fast i progress. Development is a bit slow also after all with 700+ chapters they are still stuck at Luzon. Also why won't the MC mount the mini gun at the side of one of the black hawks he acquired from president rody? won't that be more fun and it would act as a gun ship also. and for the casing he can just make a chute leading to a makeshift compartment to collect it. Another exciting mission i can recommend is to raid the SAF base at cavite and collect some lovely weapons, ammo, and armoured car. The port where decommissioned navy ships are docked. the mechanised army base where the M113 APC is located. Plus the base of Marines where they can find few amphibious APC. I think all of those are found in luzon area. all in all i really loved this novel and i hope it won't end at 1000 chapters only. you have no idea on how sick tired i am of reading novels related to reincarnation, system, and other stuff that are more biased towards china.

It started ok for me but after chapter 225 somewhere at kangaroo king up to 339 seems like a puzzle to me like how the hell did started fighting higher forms of monster even trying to hunt rakasha who is already tier 10 monster so suddenly. I didn't notice any gradual and significant growth from MC and suddenly he goes fighting OP Boss monster in consecutive manner. Apparently consistency does not exist on this novel.

I read only up to chapter 19 and decided to drop this. I honestly don't like how he started trying so hard to lay low and I think he is more concerned about the protagonists. I don't like how he act scared because of possibly changing the time line or something or afraid of affecting the development of the supposed to be protagonists. Dude, the moment you got reincarnated in your own novel you already started to be MC or protagonists! So what if you stole he's future lucky encounters and end up making him weak? that's he's problem bro. And why is he trying to explain everything but end up saying he's not sure about the exact way or process because he did not properly wrote the specific sequence while writing the novel. WTF dude?

Honestly i like chapters like this. Basically chapters with more progress and gains such as technological improvement or progress, economic progress, culture and law progress instead or relying on religios beliefs, territorial gains and new resources gains, exploration. I don't like one-sided overkill massacre on clueless tribes. Instead i would prefer if he start up the progress on oil and gas following with combustion engine, vehicles, submarine and air planes. And I prefer V1 rockets, tanks and carpet bombing than chlorine shells. I also don't like that part with the Japan side basically i just skip on those chapters. I also got fed up with the kinky sex part, a little bit is ok but too much is just bad.

The story easily get side tracked and there's a lot of unnecessary plot or bullshit. Jokes are no longer funny and it quickly became lame. After reading morethan 1000 plus chapters it no longer feels exciting.

The Idea is great, but there's too much politics on this and it deviate away from D&D MMORPG settings which it contradicts the genre. I mean why is he spending too much time and effort on opposing the southerners or light conty or reformist something? shouldn't he be grinding more exp and farming item since he basically memorised the world like the back of his hand? 450+ chapters and he's still level 33 something and the MC already spent 6 months plus in the world like dude! by that time if he focused on levelling he should be around level 60 already and conquered morethan few dozens of dungeon and owned like tens of BOSS. what about hes previous knowledge of grinding spots, hidden quest, secrets and hacks? why he is not utilising it but he spent more time on NPC's. Is this Player vs NPCS kind of novel? shouldn't it be more like PVE, grinding, hack and slash, levelling, guild or party building, raids, and collecting epic or legendary items? like bro he's already level 33 and he's still using leather armour and magic sword that he got while he's still somewhere level 15! as fan of skyrim, D&D, MMORPG, Ragnarok, Final Fantasy, witcher, and diablo i can say that the progress of the MC is inconsistent and slow assuming that he is a veteran player and guild master of the top 1 guidl that conquered all dungeons and completed 3 game DLC's. magic swordsman that can summon battle angel, suicide bomber dog and elemetal lord that can cast hundreds of fire balls in few seconds why dont you grind the undead monster?

I can't wait when he reaches the part where he's chemists will discover how to process oil, diesel, petrol, and aluminium. imagine what he can create with those, WWII era tanks and airplane what would be the reaction of the papal then?