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I came from the motohama fic and seing no update on it I left it aside to wait for new chapters thinking you went on hiatus and one day I randomly clicked on it to find it gone. Then I checked your profile and found this fic so unless I missed an update before the snap, a chapter explaining the rewrite and the new fic would have made me read it way earlier. Anyway love the fic, I like multiverse chat but few are good or update frequently but yours is interesting I love to see different sides of characters and the one you chose are not common so keep at it 👍 adding the # jujutsu and one piece might help ? I know if I found this fic when searching for these tags I would not be disappointed and on that note adding the chat members in the synopsis of your fic would help people not associating it to run of the mill main characters or waifu chat group. A little rant but Bang and Megumin are kinda looking like cardboard characters rn I think you’re planning for them to have an arc like nami and yuji but them having a little pov on the group chat earlier would have helped with humanizing? them. Bang is old and have a ton of experience but he does nothing with it and just goes with everything. We didn’t see him questioning the system and even the little training in martial art was not done when they had days on the boat (mc should also know that yuji throws hands so he should have made the connection with bang and yuji more). And megumin just seems to be there like a happy in fairy tail 😂 you don’t know what it is but it’s here so it’s normal. Tldr : them having a little character building or their reactions with how they think would have been welcomed and they wouldn’t feel like accessories to the story. Some interlude with the life of the chat members and the influence of the chat with their lives could be good That’s all till now your fic is worth reading and good so keep at it 👍

Maybe I tuned it out but I don’t recall seeing ads for the p*treon so I didn’t know you had one 😅

I think they’re waiting for the rewrite to get to the mcu or they’re waiting for a dozen chapters to read it all in one shot

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