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really not a fan of chaos mark affecting his mind and the whole combat sequence seemed very contrived

ch 53 CHAPTER 53(Chaos)

Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene

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Some harem novels are just super cringe in how the MC treats women and many of the harem members are forgotten and have little purpose after their "initiation" but what I love about this is that they each play a part in the story, and the MC does make time for each of them.

Against Heaven's Will

Eastern · Piokilek

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Sorry to hear that! Merry Christmas!!

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God succession system

Others · Harry_Dresden

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I agree, not only that but regardless of her cultivation level, she still really only has the mentality of an 8 year old... even if she is somewhat tenacious and courageous I feel it is very unrealistic that her 8 year old mind could survive the 99 samsara thing. That said, the main I stopped is because it was then revealed that Ning Shen was to be the male romance... Which is just gross, the first thing he says when he sees an 8 year old girl is "I must make her my wife" ?!?! That is a barely acceptable train of thought to have towards a grown woman. It sent me nothing but really creepy vibes... and makes me second guess my choices for reading any of the authors other works.

Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens

Fantasy · invayne

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lol these comments.. I don't care if it's yuri as long as it's not this ****er ning shen

ch 63 The Wang Clan Receives A Visitor

Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens

Fantasy · invayne

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you mean to tell me that there is no technique to allow her body to change to an ***** one? I can major shenanigans, it's cute that she starts as an OP loli... but the contrivance of forcing her to remain as one is stupid

ch 29 Six Months And Return Part One

Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens

Fantasy · invayne

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the concept that the heavens would recognize and punish a vow made by a ,6 year old kid, specifically one that didn't know what said vow meant, is a pretty lame plot device... especially since it's then hanging over her shoulders for the rest of her immortal life.

ch 10 A Vow To The Heavens

Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens

Fantasy · invayne

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I really don't understand what is going on with this novel, I see plenty of hype.. but the tags seem way off. She gets a system, abilities and gear right off the bat but then doesn't explore them?! She very rarely used the system and instead of doing anything of note she finds menial labor and settles down in a town!? How is this action and adventure, let alone system... And to be clear, I would be fine with any of this if we understood the characters motivations. The only time we do, is when we hear her say she doesn't want to know more about her dagger, wanting to understand it herself... which she then doesn't do.

New World New Life

Fantasy · ValestriaMoon

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the fact that he cannot travel with his wives to the next world or even access avalon is stupid... it signals the worst sort of harem novel, the one where older wives that were acquired lose screen time and are no longer relevant to the story... *sigh* it was bad enough in one piece where we hardly heard from them

ch 70 Prologue

Ascension or journey from world to world

Anime & Comics · PerfyX

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thanks!

ch 331 The End of Fairy Tale

God succession system

Others · Harry_Dresden

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yea, I'm really sad because I was mostly enjoying this, but this is a drop from me

ch 83 Doctor and the Garlic Dryad

Evil Goddess System

Fantasy · Tilted_Axis

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Who's to say the MC even needs to go from "earth" to the isekai'd world of Yggdrasil? Perhaps he bypasses it entirely and never was a game character to being with... also please please minimize the interactions with Momonga, but I'm all for making the Overlord arc longer, I love that world and (most) of the characters

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Rebirth : Traversing the Myriad Planes

Anime & Comics · Aht

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agreed, momonga is a tool... his NPCs are cool though if you wanna steal them from him

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Rebirth : Traversing the Myriad Planes

Anime & Comics · Aht

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I'd rather it be as AU / separate from the og plot as possible, while still re-using some of the characters

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Rebirth : Traversing the Myriad Planes

Anime & Comics · Aht

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**** **** cleo already

ch 51 Letting a wolf near his daughter

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic

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yea, I don't mind cleo per se.... but she forced herself on the MC... which isn't kosher, also... the MC needs to have more presence there, she was way to passive even if she's never been in a relationship she wouldn't NOT react / defend herself against those actions, it just seemed super forced

ch 48 I will never associate with this girl again!