Grimaced

11mth

Commented

Pretty sure the "chewing sounds" was the door from his senior brother.

"There's something wrong with this Xu Qing. There's something wrong with him!!"

Outside Of Time

Eastern · Er Gen

Grimaced

1yr

Commented

"That's great! I'm going to start growing mold if I stay here."

"That's great! I'm going start growing mold if I stay here."

Extracting Billions Of Toxins And Tempering An Unsullied Body

Eastern · Superior Human

Grimaced

1yr

Commented

originally lifeless *eyes* were burning with anger.

Zhu Hongda really felt like his lungs were going to explode from anger when he looked at the b*tch in front of him. His originally lifeless now were now burning with anger.

After Pretending To Lose All My Money, I Learn Of Human's True Nature

Urban · Super Wealthy

Grimaced

1yr

Commented

bought-->brought

Northbridge Hot Pot wasn't far from the university, and was just two streets away. Sugar had even bought him here for a meal once.

I Get A Random New Occupation Every Week

Urban · No Right

Grimaced

1yr

Commented

Might want to change mouth to lips. it just sounds better.

"You know, I don't smoke or drink, and I never do dangerous things." Qin Lin leaned closer to Zhao Moqing and kissed her mouth.

I Can Enter The Game

Urban · Ask The Heart Forever

Grimaced

1yr

Commented

Didn't he do this in a previous chapter in the tropical forest?

"Three to five meters? Is the host going to dig into the underground river?"

Are You Telling An Eight-Year-Old To Survive In The Wilderness?

Urban · Remove the Head and Eat

Grimaced

1yr

Commented

Anyone else find it unusual a kid could dig 3 meters deep with bamboo in a forest in such a short time?

Soon, a pit nearly three meters deep was dug by Bell.

Are You Telling An Eight-Year-Old To Survive In The Wilderness?

Urban · Remove the Head and Eat

Grimaced

1yr

Commented

Snakes don't have hands to punch, so instead it might be able to whip it's tail to impact his chest.

But Jem felt his attack did not have much force on it. Therefore, it did not cause severe damage to it. Still, that hit gave him a little time, but it was futile. The monster was able to punch him in the stomach, using its tail. Fortunately, Jem was able to use his Fortification ability in time. For that reason, the force was not as powerful as the tail-whipped a while ago.