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I guess, but I still think a guild would have more advantages. If he really wanted to build power and money a guild would be the best way. That way he can recruit more artisans to make money from. And with a guild he can build a solid backing that even if others tried to challenge him he could fight back. Cause I feel like being just a mercenary those second generation kids will look down own him and still try to oppress and challenge him. And even if gains some money from others hiring them, he can gain more with a guild trough his own people. Basically like having his own business. idk I just likes guild more, but choose what you already had it mind. I’m liking the story so far.
"Hey Hiro, once we're established players. Let's create our own guild. Well not a guild per se. Just a group of mercenaries. Taking jobs to help people clear dungeons for money.
The Earth After Rebirth
Fantasy · Arrkein
I don’ see why he doesn’t just start a guild. What’s the benefit of a mercenary group instead of a full guild
"Hey Hiro, once we're established players. Let's create our own guild. Well not a guild per se. Just a group of mercenaries. Taking jobs to help people clear dungeons for money.
The Earth After Rebirth
Fantasy · Arrkein
Gale x wang li or Gale x sumeri Those make the most sense. Also is this going to a harem ( hopefully it is )
ch 135 132 How to Pick up Gals (1)
Aimless Ascension
Fantasy · EG0
No problem, sorry you had to read that long blurb of words with so many grammer/spelling errors. also I'm liking the story so far. as long as the story is interesting nothing else matters, so keep up the good work. 👍
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Zero Evolution Online
Fantasy · Playful_Dragon
Giving hints about what might happen in the future can sometimes ruin a story since we are only going of what we know currently. that's why it feels forced for me.
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Zero Evolution Online
Fantasy · Playful_Dragon
I don't mind her going to revenge because of her pettiness. the problem is her being a life long enemy. if you had build a connections then it would make sense for her to be a life long enemy. but with only that it's forced at least currently. if you took out the life Ling enemy part and just let the story progress with more interactions between them the it would make more sense. but your the writer and I'm sure you have something in mind for the future.
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Zero Evolution Online
Fantasy · Playful_Dragon
??? This seems so forced, there's no reason for her to be a life long enemy from just that.
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Zero Evolution Online
Fantasy · Playful_Dragon
if you want to do a Harem that's fine if the mc actually loves to women. but if your only doing it for the sex then this is just a r-18 novel and it will make it hard to get invested in the characters or actually Care. but that's just my opinion.
ch 20 The Final Purchase
Zero Evolution Online
Fantasy · Playful_Dragon
No worries, glad to hear that you are doing better.
ch 855 Trapped Under Earth
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
I really don't know how I feel about his school arc. it kind of feels like a side story and just a waste of time. like I don't see any benefit of staying there for than a few months to find some people with talents. any more and it's just a waste.
ch 267 Chapter 267:The Monster Hunt
The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
the little fairy thing. forgot what it's actually called.
In this room in addition to Jake sat Hade, Lucia, Gerulf, Asfrid, Rogen, Haynt, Kenway, Enya, Daniel Wilderth, Kevin Wilderth, Tim, Drastan, Maeve, Svara, Hephais, Jen, Aisling, Xaverie and Melion. That is a total of 20 people.
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
What happend to the military guy
ch 55 Welcome To Tartarus Shade
Blood Legacy: New World Of Doom
Fantasy · Arkinslize
Tania was chosen first. check the previous chapter.
As they sat there silently, the black-haired girl who was chosen as the first stood up and looked at the others.
Leave Me Alone, Heroines!
Fantasy · ClashingBlades98
no worries, take your time. hope you get better soon.
ch 131 Chapter 131:Kidnapped
The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
yea no problem. The story's really interesting so far, was just a little confused while reading. but otherwise keep up the great work.
ch 0 2 Monarch's Rebirth: Chapter 2
Monarch's Rebirth
Fantasy · DivineDoku
why were just talking like equals instantly, like did we forget one is a king and the other is a counts son. if u want to build there friendship do that later, but there should still be respect cause of the status difference.
ch 0 3 Monarch's Rebirth: Chapter 3
Monarch's Rebirth
Fantasy · DivineDoku
yeah, no problem. totally understand, was just curious. good luck on your exams
ch 106 Chapter 106:Visiting The Wounded
The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess
Fantasy · Mohitkumar
Definitely gonna check it out just because of this well detailed review/summary. Also I see there’s a romance tag. Is it going to be only one FMC or a harem. I’m routing for one FMC