Cameron_Czupek - Profile

It's is by no means a bad story but the main problems are forgotten items and people in the book. Does anyone remember whqt hqppened to the priest girl with Gentle Snow. Because I don't. The Cards. The f***ing cards. Makes such a big deal about them then they are never mentioned later. The writing isn't bad it just gets blqnd with the same story over and over again. MC meets enemy enemy is strong with lots of "experts". MC beats them, they get angry and try again to take **** away from him with op items but, the MC uno reverse cards them by being more op. Like I said it's not bad but the author forgets a lot of things and the time lapse makes literally no sense. You have a month to do this quest 1000 chapters later and he finally collects the first part of the quest. Looking at you god of war temple artifacts quest. But yeah the beginning is fairpy good and I would reccomend reafing this. It is a good story just has a lot of flaws that need to be fixed.