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Tarrace

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College kid that reads novels in his spare time

2018-04-29 Joined Global

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Probably not a good point to introduce a new kid in your life

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I Became a Scum in Depressing Game

I Became a Scum in Depressing Game

Urban · _Er

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It's kind of weird to call your own race "old ones." I assumed it was something other species called them and not a name they called themselves.

"Let us seed a new set of races. We are the OLD ONES! We have created countless races across this universe! We are a race of gods and our culture is of glory so astounding, none will ever be greater!"

The First Soul (40k)

The First Soul (40k)

Video Games · Matheu_DeWitt

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Why write a isekai fic if you don't change the plot at all

Noctis pulled out his dagger. This was a good experience for him as well. To kill a human. Even if it was a merciful kill it was something he again had to get use to. He bent down in front of her and quickly stabbed her in the heart making sure not to miss. She died immediately.

Medieval World Hopper

Medieval World Hopper

Anime & Comics · Jackoftrades

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You are writing yourself into a corner here. You should have got Elora and bring in side characters which you can have subplots with. Without that its going to get repetitive. I noticed in your stories you have problems with writing subplots.

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Replied to LordOzzy

An army. Also Dorne isn't taken over yet

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That's kind of a poorly made alliance. Not saying it's not ultimately good but this deal is more in favor to Dorne and you could have got more out of it.

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He can change some things like Cap kissing that one girl in civil war

"I really don't get what you see so important in that company. What was its name again? Ah yes, Marvel Comics."

My Hollywood System

My Hollywood System

Movies · DreamThree

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Replied to Sorrest_

Really? Polygamy having bad consequences and being less stable then monogamous relationships(in which 2 partners just commit to each other), thats debatable now?

From the host's memories, it seemed that monogamy was long since dethroned as being the only 'proper' path. Although many still chose a single partner, it wasn't looked down on to have multiple partners.

Imposter System

Imposter System

Sci-fi · Pill_Guy

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In real life this makes society worse and more unstable but this is okay in a fictional setting.

From the host's memories, it seemed that monogamy was long since dethroned as being the only 'proper' path. Although many still chose a single partner, it wasn't looked down on to have multiple partners.

Imposter System

Imposter System

Sci-fi · Pill_Guy

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