Can u give the link to original?
It's chapter like these that start ruining the story.
ch 54 Interesting talk
Movies · Plug_O_Stien
This no explanation and enemy out of nowhere one after the other is getting on my nerves and ruining this story . If you want more to the story add it after u finish naruto fanfiction , you r dividing ur attention and making both good stories with great potential into something mediocre.
ch 90 88. Farewell Danzo Part-2
Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
Gerat read. It has good length and word count, though it would be better of the author started clearing abt MC power properly instead of just forshowding things, it long time due
Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Book&Literature · Se7en