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Maybe you could try to rewrite this chapter without disturbing the continuation. because I feel uncomfortable when you describe D's character in the wrong way, D is an evil god who is so bored that in search of fun he creates a system to save the planet for fun. Even if there are existences that he doesn't understand or new variables, he won't destroy them instead he will regard them as entertainment and a new challenge for those who can reach him, that's why he provides the heresy skill. Please improve it so that readers will continue to continue your story. Also try to create your own world, don't stick to the existing plot, besides that, don't make the MC directly OP, please explain the process of getting it more clearly. Lastly, pay attention to the balance of power, don't make it too OP so that the story is monotonous and has no ups and downs

in the Kumo Desuka series. Every time an Appricial skill is used on an opponent, the opponent will feel uncomfortable and disturbed, and will be aware that they are being watched.

Your forget about spesial skill kumoko (idate jump= +500 speed

in the Kumo Desuka series. Every time an Appricial skill is used on an opponent, the opponent will feel uncomfortable and disturbed, and will be aware that they are being watched.

does anyone know where I can read chapter 97+

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I'm sorry, i don't know about that, please say thank for the author

write your story, don't rush to follow the main storyline, and continue to build the character of the main character. I am optimistic and like your story[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Cerita anda sangat seru, bisakah menga update lebih cepat