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MC is likeable, but ML has too many red flags (I cannot). I admittedly skip some parts if ML is there because it's too much cringe and it's a HUGE NO NO. If you ever encounter people with behaviors like that of ML's in real life such as being possessive and non-consensual in his advances, then I suggest you: RUN. Dom is funny, but he is only more like the reader's avatar that constantly ships the leads. I don't know much about the purpose of his character aside being an assistant and a readers' avatar. As for other characters, the father is kinda okay? But the others are more just backgrounds, not much depth. As for the storyline, it's no different from most stories here in the same genre. Same secret genius MC; same ultimate rich, cold, stiff, handsome ML; same jealous villains who are less smart than them; etc. Too much tell, not much show. I'm mainly referring to the plot. She's done this, then that. And voila! She's ultra rich! It's so hard to form any emotional bond with the character. They are too superficial, not much relatable. Like gurllll, you're a trader, a hacker, a computer programmer, composer, singer, but still manage to have time for everything. What are you--- god? Plus, you instantly got rich just for a few days of trading, without any losses? You must be lady luck! I'm too sleepy to elaborate much. But I do hope not to discourage the author. Instead, view this somewhat as pointers to write better.

Except for Adeline Grant's works, I don't like all Qidian's stories. Too overpowered, too cliched, too many unrelatable Mary Sue characters, too much dilly-dallying, bad writing, too many misused words, too many useless dialogues, and pointless characters and arcs. BUT this may be an exception. So far, this story provides great promise, and I'll be reading on.