Love your story. Can't wait for the next chapters. Sadly I have to put it on hold so I can binge read when I accumilate enough chapters!
ch 24 **Chapter 24: Death Refinement**
Book&Literature · ACDPQS
The quality improved again. Thanx for the chapter!
ch 25 Chapter 20 Return to Nuoding Academy
Anime & Comics · Un1que
Why did the translation drop so much? Its not different from mtl at this point!
ch 24 Chapter 19 The Reason for Not Joining
Anime & Comics · Un1que
What nonsense! Even the genin in Konoha know about his bloodline, and we are supposed to believe that Suna aren't aware of the genius kid who decimated the other villages in the Chuunin exam? Lousy spy.
ch 67 Chapter 67: Fierce Battle in the Sand Village
Anime & Comics · DemonWriter
Dropped
ch 32 Embarking on the Journey Part 1
Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin
Focus more on this. The story is good but upload speed is slow
ch 0 -2 Sister Work Poll
Anime & Comics · AdzukiProductions
Unfortunately this one failed to live up to its potential!
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What Was Needed by Serenechaos. The MC is female but there is no romance or fluffy Bullshit. You can find it on AO3
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Of course the story has its bad points too. Bizzef seems to be getting too strong too fast. The abilities he developed so far are too op and they are inching closer to breaking the limit of what a specialist could do. He has meta knowledge of how to develop his Nen but there is no mention of training the body. The secondary characters are not developed very well; I can't even remember how he met and recruited Node or if that was mentioned at all. And these are just off the top my head. Still the potential is there. So keep up the good work author-san. And kudos for the upload speed!
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I have scoured the internet from the top to the bottom; and, despite HxH popularity, interesting characters, and vast intricate world, I only found a single HxH fanfic that could be considered good. This one has the potential to be the second. The MC is reborn as Bizzef, the pervert who was single handedly taking care of East Gordeau bureaucracy during the Chimera Ant invasion, you know, the guy who had an underground palace with a harem. At first, the author's choice seems weird and uninspiring. Bizzef in the original is an old short pervert with shifty face and squeaky voice; but when you carefully think about it, that choice is exactly what gives this fanfic the enormous potential I mentioned earlier. The upcoming Chimera Ant Crisis, the looming threat of Gyro, the unification of the Balsa islands and becoming the new V6, politics vs the Kakin Empire, the Dark Continent; so many interesting directions the story could take. If the author manages to take advantage of them, then not only can we witness the rise of an outstanding HxH fanfic but it may actually inspire a new wave of good HxH SI fanfics like Dreaming of Sunshine did for Naruto.
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Inspiration from LOTM is good and all, it makes me want to read more, and there is nothing wrong with naming your magic system Path, but if you start inserting names like Medici then it stops being an inspiration and begins to seem more like a fanfiction! That takes away from your originality
ch 0 6 Red Eyes
Fantasy · PandaDumpling
It would have been better if there was some struggle, there's no growth without challenge u know. This way is interesting too though. I just hope the author wont ignore the ramifications of changing the plot. No hachi changes a lot in sabody. No luffy means no bounty. How will Nami join and respect luffy if he didn't help her... etc
ch 19 Ch-19
Anime & Comics · Horny_Gentleman
And wth is Aegis doing when human future soldiers are being turned into dolls with no potential of advancing? Isn't the governer in contact with them?
ch 454 Chapter 454 – Dark Future
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach