My fav story is The King's Avatar.
I like how their wolves are like AR apparition invisible friends who sass them. it's fun.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4
Fantasy · Nathalie Hooker
the story is legitimately cute so far, but it needs more editing. the sentence structure is mostly fine, but the grammar is not.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3
the tense here is all over the place, switching from past to present and back to past again. it's also not actually telling me a story. it reads more like a summary. I don't feel like I'm in the moment with the MC.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
this is not a great start. there's 0 description, just dialog and a minor amount of character action.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
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I like how their wolves are like AR apparition invisible friends who sass them. it's fun.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4
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Fantasy · Nathalie Hooker