can you change the [young female] to something along the line a young female voice said. i like your writing style and i hope you keep it up, but i think leave just name of one speaking should change. anyway thanks for the chapter, and this just a suggestion.
ch 0 2 The Old Life (Part 2)
Games · TheShingPen
And so after he sighed, he said after his breath in a low voice that none would hear him. what did he say?
ch 0 7 Unexpected Progress
From Player To Npc
Games · TheShingPen