alliterativearts

10mth

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"Yakuza-Like-A-Dragonite used Blaze on Grumpummeller. It's not very effective." Bro, you need to high ground before fire becomes effective!

For a full minute, Lung bathed the streets in fire, the heat distorting the air and burning down brick and asphalt alike, raising a giant cloud of pitch back smoke above the buildings. Finally, he stopped, hovering in the air above the inferno, his wings flapping slowly.

Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)

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alliterativearts

11mth

Commented

"I suppose you would," Danette sighed, giving the princess a small smile. "I'm… adapting, Kara is helping out a lot and the internet doesn't hurt. It's so much easier to learn about things now than during the war."

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Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

Never really thought too much about it, but if Dannete was playing a ~25 yr old and Flash is guessing she's 70 after dying in '45, then the present is most probably in the 1990s... But whatever. Comic book years hold little meaning anyway.

Flash's eyes took the both of them in as he approached. "Well, nice to meet you. I have to say, you're looking incredibly good for a 70 year old, are you aging in reverse?"

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

*It's* half-giant... Ouch, really not a many yet there, boy.

''This boy here, its half-giant and half-God. We found out that the nature of those two powers is fighting for control inside the boy and killing him slowly. We went to Mimir looking for responses, and he told us to come to you.'' Poseidon told Freya everything.

Reincarnated as Poseidon in GOW

Video Games · Pop0

alliterativearts

1yr

Replied to Ronin46

Not remembering if it was spelled "norse" in game or not, but the English spelling for the thing that Baldur is vulnerable to is indeed: "Mistletoe". OG myth is that Freya went around to every rock and river, every living planet, animal and everything in between and asked that they pledge never to harm her son. All but mistletoe agreed. Hence the vulnerability.

Poseidon nodded, '' I'll just say something that maybe can gain your trust... mistletoe''

Reincarnated as Poseidon in GOW

Video Games · Pop0

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

As a patron, I can say we are indeed "halping".

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Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

It's not possible. "Objects are okay to move FTL" is usually discussed when the object is in a vacuum/outer space. Things moving a fraction of FTL create sonic booms bc they have to push air molecules out of the way. Speedsters get away with their speed in DC since they all have some sort of access to the Speed Force and that magically negates friction or something. Just be honest and say: "handwave logic here".

So, for the entire night, she continued to practice the Molecular Manipulation power, using her speed so that the night would pass a lot more slower than it should have. Doing this had made her master her bioelectric forcefield to a point where she could move in light speed and not even cause the tiniest gust of speed to happen. (A/N: Don't Tell me it's impossible, if an object with mass can move FTL, then this is possible.)

Start As Superman's Sidekick

Anime & Comics · Silk_Marvs

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

I'll never forget this terrible joke comic stripe that basically said: "Clark, I have cancer. I don't know how but the doctor said I was exposed to thousands of chest x-rays... I'm going to die." I've never been able to read things like this the same since that joke.

Her favourite power was perhaps X-ray vision and telescopic vision. These two powers came at the same time and she welcomed them with open arms. Now, no attractive girl was safe from her perverted eyes and the best thing was they wouldn't even know they were been stared at. She could stare at a girl next class the entire class and she couldn't even realize it, truly a power made just for her! Besides super speed, these two were perhaps the most used powers of hers.

Start As Superman's Sidekick

Anime & Comics · Silk_Marvs

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

"Danvers", no?

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Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

"Oh, and Billy, it may have been a reasonable misunderstanding, but I do expect you to fix up the door before I get back. Comprende."

"Right, see you later then."

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

"But before she could make it back to the den, Kara heard the apartment's front door open. The almost immediately ensuing girlish shriek was quickly followed by a hasty shout of 'Shazam!'."

From ahead of her she heard the apartment door opening, then a little girl's scream followed by a shout of "Shazam!"

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

"...coursing through his muscled form."

Kara's eyes went wide as the large superhero burst through her door, damaging the wall and breaking the wooden frame with a worried look on his face, electricity was still cursing through his muscled form.

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Replied to Best_Human_Evil

(Going off my memory) On Earth-16, back in WW2-era, a mad scientist-type guy created a family's worth of androids to help him infiltrate and destroy the Justice League of America. Each android was given an elemental power (earth, wind, fire, etc. You know the tropes) but, more importantly, the scientist made the androids think they were human. Scientist did too good a job, and, against his wishes, his androids heroically sacrificed themselves at some point to stop some Big Bad despite them just discovering what they were. Only Red Tornado survived, the rest got the whole honorary "we'll think of you as having been human, deep down, after you're dead" treatment.

ch 12 Chapter 12

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

My own preference is the 1-fully-completed-chapter model, but the game of uploads is almost entirely about consistency. If your own style is to sit down once and hammer out a full chapter, or if it's to sit down and write piecemeal sections over the course of 2-6 days, then whichever release model fits that better would be my recommendation for you. Either way, CONSISTENCY. Writing and releasing is an endurance muscle; it can be trained effectively, but disruptions lead to frustration and giving up. Even if you truly dislike something you put out, it really is better to put it out there. There are far too many who let "perfect be the enemy of the good".

ch 12 Chapter 12

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

"flawed being". It would really, really suck if every being was a failure...

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Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

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alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

"Nothing much. I was just curious how a Kryptonian, two Green Lanterns and supposedly the world's greatest detective missed the second Superman clone and a frozen sidekick when you search Cadmus?"

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Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

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alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

It's a good chapter even if you're not too happy with it though... You're doing great, keep it up.

ch 11 Chapter 11

Reincarnated as Supergirl (DC / YJ)

Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav

alliterativearts

1yr

Commented

She really needs to figure out an income source that isn't mining gold pronto. It might be real gold, but flooding the market with the levels of any commodity she's talking about has a decent chance of collapsing the value of the asset. Meaning it's not a sustainable income source, not even mentioning the secondary effects such a collapse might have on people's savings or markets more broadly. Things might be going in a different direction but the Power Girl solution of "start a massively successful tech company" can't come quick enough for me.

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